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Hidden and Fallen In Disrepair

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Mossy vines served as camouflage for a decaying headstone No family members left to maintain is known Thus hidden and fallen into disrepair Deeply weatherworn and embraced there This marker sets into the ground alone Mossy vines served as camouflage for a decaying headstone Threads of piercing light filtering through windblown Limbs surrounded by trees, ferns, blackberries, and wildflowers Vegetation constantly threatening to swallow so it cowers To nature’s breath, and tranquil outdoors, a hidden embellished millstone Mossy vines served as camouflage for a decaying headstone Dreams of once beloved family heir now all alone Notched poem about their lives fades with memories written Reveal the epitaph of who's buried and hidden Now without pain in the heavens mansion near God's throne 8/7/2016 Rhyme scheme aabba Camouflage Me A Poem - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Constance La France

Date: 8/12/2016 10:57:00 PM

Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem and I love the image too!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/12/2016 9:43:00 AM

So touchy, so emotional, so beautiful. I am overwhelmed. Congrats Eve to win. Love

Eve Roper
Date: 8/12/2016 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Anisha.

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/11/2016 6:05:00 PM

So very heartfelt and sad, Eve, but so beautifully written. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper
Date: 8/12/2016 4:27:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/11/2016 4:38:00 AM

Lovely poem with beautiful last two lines:) Congratulations on your win, Eve:)

Eve Roper
Date: 8/12/2016 4:27:00 PM

Thank you, Jo.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/10/2016 11:18:00 PM

Hi Eve, It's good to see you on the podium. Congratulations on 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Eve Roper
Date: 8/12/2016 4:28:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/10/2016 9:40:00 PM

Eve, this is remarkable lady..I love the word "disrepair"...congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Eve Roper
Date: 8/12/2016 4:28:00 PM

Thank you, Laura .

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/10/2016 9:00:00 PM

This was a unique and beautifully written epic incorporating the lines so perfectly !! Well done, Eve!!! Congratulations!

Eve Roper
Date: 8/12/2016 4:29:00 PM

Thank you, Carrie.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/10/2016 3:35:00 PM

Hi Eve, You have penned a sad piece. I could feel an overwhelming sadness within each line. I must say this write is good as whole but the line that stood out to me was "No family members left to maintain is known" . I have a feeling you will be on the winners list. I wish you the very best in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis

Shaniki Smith

Date: 8/10/2016 1:47:00 PM

Thanks for all the comments! You keep up the great work!

Eve Roper
Date: 8/12/2016 4:29:00 PM

Thank you, Shaniki.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/10/2016 8:39:00 AM

- A sad theme, Eve - No more family .... all dead - Wonderful written as always - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper
Date: 8/12/2016 4:29:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2016 4:02:00 PM

absolutely wonderful writing from you, Eve . A winner for sure!

Eve Roper
Date: 8/12/2016 4:30:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2016 7:26:00 AM

You penned this so beautifully Eve with wonderful imagery of this sad scence - I hate to see graves lying unkempt and unloved - I am being scattered so no trace of my existence will be etched in stone:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7

Eve Roper
Date: 8/12/2016 4:30:00 PM

Thank you, Jan.

Jean Murray

Date: 8/8/2016 5:30:00 AM

It's true that these gravestones are to be found often in dilapated graveyards where nature has taken over again; "surrounded by trees, ferns, blackberries, and wildflowers". Beautiful vision Eve.

Eve Roper
Date: 8/12/2016 4:31:00 PM

Thank you, Jean, those blackberries or delicious, but dangerous.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 8/7/2016 10:40:00 PM

Brilliant in message and presentation, may I wish you the best in the contest; but more important in a large family to mourn your passing when the time comes (hopefully many years down the road).