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the weeping willow shelters a laughing maiden ~ a young man searches

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/10/2009 3:06:00 PM
A great playful piece, perfect for the season. Kat x
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Date: 5/8/2009 4:09:00 PM
Nice use of imagery for an uplifting view. You've got me smiling with this one. I enjoyed it. Karen
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Date: 5/8/2009 2:27:00 PM
What an incredible haiku, Patricia! Your talent will never be "Hidden" in works such as this. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/8/2009 12:08:00 PM
Wow, beautiful work Patricia. Clever perspective...Raul
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