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If I had not seen you yesterday With my eyes I would think you a hill Not a mountain For today The clouds go to the sky And you hidden Behind closed doors of white
written: 10-16-2019 copyright 2019 Jeanne McGee San Pedro, Guatemala
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Nance Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 11:03 AM
Nice description. :)
Michael Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 4:14 AM
Nice...I like this...If you hadn't seen before...
Mcgee Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 9:45 AM
and today, once again, the mountain is grand...xoxox
Green Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 1:47 PM
Loved the imagery that created Jeanne. Beautifully done.
Mcgee Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 9:44 AM
it was a beautiful scene. thank you.
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