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Hibiscus Sunrise

Hibiscus Sunrise Fragrant breezes surround me, sifting on the glowing rays beyond the heather hedge, walking barefoot, senses fly, lemonade the tint… born upon this early morning sky Lantana lullabies, still a faint offering, relinquish me of moon fed destinies, setting me free once more in the golden sheen of a pristine hibiscus sunrise Soft, a haze does find me in a sphere of intoxicated dreams swirling about this blue canopy, this euphoric frame bordering the tapestries of nature’s happiness On this day wings sprout, gossamer in saffron flow from shoulders soft and bliss divine, perfect of a vision I do long to harbor near For in my eyes again reflects your beauty and I touch you… as I breath in the majesty of my desires, thanking the heavens once more for my morning blessings Good morning Soupers

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Date: 4/24/2017 11:26:00 PM
A lovely read, Chris! Poetry just runs through your veins! Your every breath it seems! Always a pleasure to read your work, and good morning to you!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/25/2017 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Rick. I appreciate you saying so and I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 4/24/2017 1:25:00 PM
This is so pleasant to read. Absolutely beautiful and with grace. Thanks for sharing. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 5:35:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. Your wonderful comments and your friendship are very special to me. Thank you for being my friend.
Date: 4/24/2017 11:03:00 AM
Imagery so perfectly penned Chris, beautiful. #7
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you so very much Elizabeth.
Date: 4/24/2017 10:34:00 AM
I am touched...indeed.What a beauty...What a morning...and an afternoon here for me. Bongu.That would mean Good Morning in maltese Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 10:38:00 AM
Bongu my sweet friend. I am happy you came by for a visit this morning/afternoon. Here's hoping your afternoon is as beautiful as the words you always leave for me, for if it is, then it will be the most gorgeous part of the day. :)
Date: 4/24/2017 9:35:00 AM
What an enchanting way to start the day. A soothing and evocative moment that makes you feel like you are coming from the land of dreams to an equally blissful day, gently sprouting gossamer wings. A 7:) Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 10:06:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend for always leaving such kind thoughts for me. I am happy you stopped by this morning
Date: 4/24/2017 9:11:00 AM
I love hibiscus, lantana, crocus. And all the colours and fragrances your poem offers me in abundance . It's lovely my friend.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thank you so very much Darren. I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 4/24/2017 8:07:00 AM
Chris, your imagery is amazingly beautiful as always... However, I didn't know where you were going with the poem until the last stanza...
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 10:02:00 AM
Thank you so very much Trisha and the truth...I didn't really know where it was going either until I got to the end. That happens often with me. :)
Date: 4/24/2017 7:48:00 AM
A very beautiful , peaceful poem , Chris. Well done :)
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi. I'm glad you liked this one.
Date: 4/24/2017 7:45:00 AM
I love the use of lantana lullabies...Have a great morning Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 10:04:00 AM
Thanks so much Tim, the lantana and the hibiscus are full in bloom down this way.
Date: 4/24/2017 7:23:00 AM
Dawn of a poetic day painted with words so fine dear, Chris! A 7!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 10:04:00 AM
Thank you so very much Demetrios.
Date: 4/24/2017 7:04:00 AM
Another brilliant offering from the Green pen of Chris to grace our lonely morning with hopeful dreams. Love it.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 10:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Phil. I like that. :)

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