Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Tanka

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Hibiscus Hypnotic

Yellow and pink hued
ruffled petal elegance
Magnetic beauty
drawing crowds in days so long
Simmering sunshine shadows

Time flees chase of life
around the corner of blooms
where music's playing
Blue skies don clouds of the hour
in this summer of rare sights

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Anne-Lise Andresen July 3, 2023 at 10:15 AM - Beautiful flower that adorns the summer ... lovely written, Evelyn :) - hugs Evelyn Judy Buehler July 3, 2023 at 10:37 AM Thank you for your precious comment, Anne-Lise. hugs :)

Bill Baker July 2, 2023 at 4:12 PM I enjoyed reading your Tanka poem, Evelyn. As always, your imagery is exquisite my friend. Have a great July! Bill Evelyn Judy Buehler July 3, 2023 at 10:35 AM I appreciate your warm remarks so much, Bill. I hope your July is blessed.

Victor Buhagiar July 2, 2023 at 7:58 AM Dear Evelyn, Hibiscus are so beautiful especially when they are multi-colored. My sis has them. The sun does not reach my poor patch much. Your descriptions are so alluring and appealing. Evelyn Judy Buehler July 2, 2023 at 8:40 AM I don't have hibiscus myself, but if I could I'd have all the all the world's flowers in my garden. Thank you for your lovely comments. :)

Vijay Pandit July 2, 2023 at 5:19 AM Yellow and pink hued ruffled petal elegance Magnetic beauty--as beautiful as the flower it describes. Much enjoyed your descriptions, Evelyn. Evelyn Judy Buehler July 2, 2023 at 8:37 AM Thank you so much for the pleasure of your encouraging, favorable response. I hope your day is nice.

Yann Rolland July 1, 2023 at 7:32 PM natural elegance of poetry, enjoyed your images and the colors Evelyn Judy Buehler July 1, 2023 at 10:18 PM Thank you so much for the happy thoughts, Yann. :)