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Hues of pink, yellow, red How sweet its nectar flows Hovering above it Hummingbirds sweetly sip Honey bees can't resist Here comes a butterfly Hurrying for a taste! ~ 2/20/17

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Date: 7/30/2017 11:28:00 PM
Hi Joseph, such a beautifully illustrated moment in time :)
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Date: 3/6/2017 10:46:00 AM
This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.
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Date: 3/2/2017 4:44:00 PM
congrats Joseph...lovely read...Seren
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Date: 3/6/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thank you Seren
Date: 2/25/2017 7:56:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful win, Joseph! The hibiscus is one of my favorite flowers and I always love to wear one in my hair! A-7! Pandita
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Date: 3/6/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thank you Pandita
Date: 2/24/2017 10:40:00 PM
Beautiful, Joseph! Hibiscus is one of the more common flowers where I live. I remember bees always buzzing around them when I was a little girl, but I hardly hear them anymore...not a good sign. Sorry if I digressed, but your poem reminded me. Congrats on your win! Hugs. Rhonda
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Date: 2/25/2017 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Rhonda
Date: 2/24/2017 8:01:00 PM
Lovely! Congrats, Joseph!
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Date: 2/24/2017 9:45:00 PM
Thank you Kim
Date: 2/24/2017 11:50:00 AM
Loved this! Congrats on your win, Joseph :)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/24/2017 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Laura
Date: 2/24/2017 8:22:00 AM
Lovely write Joseph, congratulations...
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Date: 2/24/2017 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Charlie
Date: 2/24/2017 4:16:00 AM
This is really beautiful, Joseph:) congratulations:) a 7:)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/24/2017 7:06:00 AM
Thank you Jo
Date: 2/24/2017 2:49:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely poem in Pleiades H contest, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/24/2017 7:05:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine
Date: 2/23/2017 11:28:00 PM
Very good :) a 7 and congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/24/2017 7:05:00 AM
Thank you Eve
Date: 2/23/2017 7:30:00 PM
ahhh, we scored together with our hibiscus and honey!!! Congrats, JOseph!
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Joseph May
Date: 2/23/2017 8:35:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, they complement each other well..Hugs
Date: 2/23/2017 5:37:00 PM
Well done Joseph well deserved win!
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Joseph May
Date: 2/23/2017 6:23:00 PM
Thank you John
Date: 2/23/2017 5:13:00 PM
Beautiful. I love Hibiscus. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/23/2017 6:23:00 PM
thank you Agnes ..it's a lovely flower
Date: 2/23/2017 5:13:00 PM
An excellent Pleiades, Joseph! I love the imagery and the smooth flowing lines! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim
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Joseph May
Date: 2/23/2017 6:22:00 PM
Thank you for my top placement Kim...Blessings
Date: 2/20/2017 8:44:00 PM
VERY nicely done. honey bees AND hummingbirds you got into it!!!
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Date: 2/21/2017 5:45:00 AM
Thanks Andrea... glad they both started with H
Date: 2/20/2017 5:22:00 PM
You paint a pretty picture, Joseph:)
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Date: 2/21/2017 5:38:00 AM
Thanks Daniel
Date: 2/20/2017 5:07:00 PM
Fabulous imagery Joseph - i wish i could see it for real especially a hummingbird:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/21/2017 5:37:00 AM
Thanks Jan...Do you see them in summer?

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