Hibiscus

Hi, gentle flower. Good morning to you, waking from your dreamy slumber. Like rays of sun light, your golden petals reach forth to greet the new day. Glistening in the morning haze with drops of honey kissed dew, you beckon forth those that would take from you your life renewing nectar, leaving for you the crystalline promise of renewal from the fertile dust that brings forth the promise of new life. Gently your limbs bow to the breeze that warms your leaves as the light shines brightly moving from this side to that, and the shadows grow long as the day hurries on and the specter of dreams awaits your inevitable slumber. Twilight ascends in rapid demeanor inviting your satin wings to enfold you with whispered silence as you are drawn into deepening sleep. The day is done and the time has come as darkness sings the final dirge that sees you to your everlasting rest, never more to cast your Venusian beauty upon the eyes of the world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ward Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 3:19 AM
I enjoyed this very much. Julia, with best wishes.
Inman Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 8:31 AM
Thank you Julia, its nice when someone visits one of my earlier ones.
Deschler Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 2:35 PM
I really enjoyed this wonderful poem, James. The imagery your words have painted here is so vivid! Very nicely penned!
Inman Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 8:04 AM
Sorry for taking soooo long to respond to your comment. I was reading your "March" poem (lovely) and remembered this. Thank you for the nice comment.
La France Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 1:59 PM
James, absolutely beautiful in every way 7++++ and thanks for visiting my puppy poem, yes those cute little puppies do tend to grow and quite quickly to!!!
Inman Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 3:16 PM
BW, Hi, thank you, you are tooo kind. Just visited your End Line, "Fathomless Tangled Poem"-again. It is a very special poem.
Ward Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Very nice!
Inman Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:09 PM
Thank you Julia. Thanks for the visit.
Kendrick Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 4:25 PM
I do enjoy my Hibiscus in the summer..The flowers are so lovely but they don't last very long..Good work..Thanks for the visit to my p age..Sara
Inman Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 4:51 PM
Thanks Sara, I'm a huge fan of flowers.
Onclaud Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 2:43 PM
i like the shape and imagery of this delightful piece, james... fascinated!.. hugggs
Inman Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 11:02 AM
Nette, it seems my reply to you yesterday got lost in the cloud. My second attempt. Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
Allison Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 1:59 PM
The poem is as stunning as the flower - a truly beautiful write James! Hugs jan xx7
Inman Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 4:49 PM
What a wonderful comment. Thank you.
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