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Hiatus Screaming

canal then paradise hiatus screaming seed planted in steamy night succotash not my favorite food is it food or suffering we weren’t meant to take a break to plow a mistake to wait and wait and wait for Eden A-d-a-m climax of nine whole months tick tock was there a clock? the bomb goes off the seed itself was not the error the mistake was a created thing thinking God was mistaken ooh...ooh...he sees the light it’s too late for time travel the past is the past present’s tense a bottle, tit for tat he’s drunk on hiatus 2/5/2021 Chantelle Cooke’s Hiatus

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Date: 2/6/2021 9:45:00 AM
How evocative, especially 'too late for time travel' - many layers here -
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2021 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 2/6/2021 2:39:00 AM
I regret tis poem is beyond me. Soupmail me please.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2021 1:56:00 PM
I soupmailed you.

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