Hey! You! Get Off of My Ship...

Thank goodness we're off that ship
I feel like we've been on an acid trip

To have my crew stand by my side
United together no one can divide

I recall the day our story started
My ship and it's entitlement slowly departed

To outer space at warp factor six we went
As we save mankind although tired and spent

Planets were reached as humanity stretched
The history of humans was now future etched

Our mission accomplished we headed back
I now sit in this room and take all this flak

Thinking, pondering in this padded place
As my shadow and I stare on fully laced

If it was not for this jacket I'd shake his hand
This dark shape on the wall is my second in command

They tell me I'll never be spaceman of the year
"I will so, have no fear!" I just have to get out of here....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 11:22 PM
interesting & creative as to a space of outer space. this is a cool poem. how dare them say you won't be spaceman of the year.lol -Always&Forever Lynette
Trusty Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 12:11 PM
I like this a lot James. Esp sampling the Rolling Stones in the title, ya can't beat em!. all th best James. Check Soup mail pls. JT
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:27 PM
haha, good one, James! Luv, andrea
Peranteau Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Hey James...this could be the makings of a great short story ! Great write ! soup mail james
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May 19, 2010 at 7:11 AM
smiles to this one James, well done, and enjoyed,..p.d
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