Julie Grenness Poet Free verse

Hey You Get Off of My Cloud For Contest

Hey You, get off of My Cloud.  

(Sing along to the Rolling Stones, synaesthesia means songs on the brain!) 

Grumpy old God woke up with a frown,
Angels heard His voice so loud,
"Do you angels hear this sound?
Hey, you, get off of my cloud!
Angels, stop acting the clown,
Clean up these feathers I found!
Hey you, get off  of my cloud!
I don't want you around,
Go to Earth, that's where you're bound!
Hey you, get off of my cloud,
HEY YOU, GET OFF OF MY CLOUD!!"
Yes, God woke up grumpy and loud!

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Poet Destroyer A June 18, 2015 at 11:43 PM JULIE, Congratulations on your cloud win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Skat A June 16, 2015 at 9:15 PM Julie, Congratulations on a poem well done. Thank you for entering my CLOUD contest. Luv SKAT Julie Grenness June 16, 2015 at 11:27 PM Dear Skat, Thank you, great idea, that one was a bit of fun. Regards from Julie.