Hey You

Tears in your eyes So disillusioned What happened to your dreams, girl? Life is still there for the taking Break out of your shell Don’t let life pass you by Reach for it Take the challenge Above all Hold on to your dreams Come on give me a smile You can choose to Make your dreams come true You live only once Every passing moment is gone forever Stand up and celebrate Say YES to life AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on October 16, 2017 for contest WAKE UP MY HEART sponsored by JULIE LEIGH RODEHEAVER

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/5/2017 4:42:00 PM

I like the line Make your dreams come true.Hold onto your dream is another line i like. This poem is beautifully written. Have a niceevening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/6/2017 10:40:00 AM

Your welcome Lin. Have a nice day my friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/5/2017 5:30:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene. I am very happy that my poems resonate with you. Line xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/16/2017 10:12:00 PM

I like this for the contest :) and I like this, needed to read this xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/17/2017 12:33:00 AM

HI Maureen. Thanks for your visit and taking the time to comment. Have an awesome week!