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Poetic Form: Dodoitsu
Inspired: 2024 February 28

*3rd Place*
Vo dee oh doe
Contest Judged: 2024 May 28
Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues

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Hey Ya-dodo

hey ya! (uh-oh) no ring! (oooh)
don't wanna meet your daddy
don't wanna meet your mama
a short pass, no hail Mary, <--[long forward football pass]
you think you got it

Copyright © William Kelii Kekaula | Year Posted 2024

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Anne-Lise Andresen

May 30, 2024 at 2:06 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, William :) - hugs

William Kelii Kekaula

May 30, 2024 at 4:25 AM

I am grateful, Anne-Lise, Blessings, Aloha, William

May 29, 2024 at 5:54 AM

Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

William Kelii Kekaula

May 29, 2024 at 7:13 AM

Dodo..., a difficult form that I endured with my love of sports, thanks, Sara, Aloha, William.

May 28, 2024 at 9:32 PM

Congrats, William! No ring! No visit to the parents…seems like trouble in paradise…well not exactly paradise, eh…

William Kelii Kekaula

May 28, 2024 at 10:48 PM

Kim, I'd fun from the get-go, thanks and Mahalo, William

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