Robert Johnson Poet Rhyme

Hey What Can I Say

I know this will sound like I'm full of myself.
I'm really quite a stud.
The other night I stole a girl away from some poor dud.
I sauntered up and had my way and oooh, I tell you what.
I gave it to her good and straight and deep down from the gut.
She didn't resist when I grabbed her wrist.
And pinned her in the hall.
But then I woke like some cruel joke.
I'm not a stud at all.

9/27

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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday October 24, 2012 at 7:37 AM Hey What can I say, Robert: I'm getting broke from this Unguided Tour around your garage sale!Your Black Diamond is too much high price for me and I'm getting back some other day when I am rich enough to have it. See you later. You can already tell Andrea Dietrich that I got her portrait on my wall...lol Hanitra

Elizabeth Wesley October 11, 2012 at 9:12 AM Wello, sometimes it doesn't pay to wake up, I've been there too. On the other hand it's only your opinion and that doesn't always count! :) Love Lizzie

Debra Squyres October 10, 2012 at 12:12 PM Was looking to see if you had something new...I still really like this !!

Robert Pettit October 9, 2012 at 8:27 PM Nicely written as it is entertaining reading.

Lynn Dolly October 2, 2012 at 3:51 PM Haha. This is cool:)

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2012 at 8:55 AM Hey, I am back here trying to catch up. Where is a new poem??

Jack Ellison September 29, 2012 at 1:50 PM Been there... done that! What a disappointment eh! LOL Great write... cheers!

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2012 at 7:09 PM This is a GREAT way to do a dream poem. They can be so many kinds. and the title for this is perfect!!

Ilene Bauer September 27, 2012 at 6:19 PM i love the rhyme and rhythm of this poem and i like the ending - nice one!

Debra Squyres September 27, 2012 at 4:09 PM lol LOVE THIS !! In my dreams I am always sooo thin and beautiful..then I wake up lol This is really a cute poem, thanks for the smile and yes I laughed out loud and still smiling !!