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Hey What Can I Say

I know this will sound like I'm full of myself. I'm really quite a stud. The other night I stole a girl away from some poor dud. I sauntered up and had my way and oooh, I tell you what. I gave it to her good and straight and deep down from the gut. She didn't resist when I grabbed her wrist. And pinned her in the hall. But then I woke like some cruel joke. I'm not a stud at all. 9/27

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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/24/2012 7:37:00 AM

Hey What can I say, Robert: I'm getting broke from this Unguided Tour around your garage sale!Your Black Diamond is too much high price for me and I'm getting back some other day when I am rich enough to have it. See you later. You can already tell Andrea Dietrich that I got her portrait on my wall...lol Hanitra

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/11/2012 9:12:00 AM

Wello, sometimes it doesn't pay to wake up, I've been there too. On the other hand it's only your opinion and that doesn't always count! :) Love Lizzie

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/10/2012 12:12:00 PM

Was looking to see if you had something new...I still really like this !!

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/9/2012 8:27:00 PM

Nicely written as it is entertaining reading.

Lynn Dolly

Date: 10/2/2012 3:51:00 PM

Haha. This is cool:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2012 8:55:00 AM

Hey, I am back here trying to catch up. Where is a new poem??

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/29/2012 1:50:00 PM

Been there... done that! What a disappointment eh! LOL Great write... cheers!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2012 7:09:00 PM

This is a GREAT way to do a dream poem. They can be so many kinds. and the title for this is perfect!!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/27/2012 6:19:00 PM

i love the rhyme and rhythm of this poem and i like the ending - nice one!

Debra Squyres

Date: 9/27/2012 4:09:00 PM

lol LOVE THIS !! In my dreams I am always sooo thin and beautiful..then I wake up lol This is really a cute poem, thanks for the smile and yes I laughed out loud and still smiling !!