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Hey Poetess,I Am Your Pen--Beseech

Oh,cruel poetess! I am your everflowing writing pen, never did you write a poem for me though I longed for it again and again, you write so many poems every day and I shape them without any fail, Oh,cruel poetess! Why don't you write me a fairy tale? Oh, heartless poetess! Though I am with you since a long ago, you never tried to listen to my heart or even never sincerely cared to know, the words that I wanted to write down to create a heartfelt poem of my own, Oh,heartless poetess! Do you think I don't have any emotion? Oh, mindless poetess! When my mind was clouded with pain, you didn't bother to write a joyful poem showering through me an ecstasy of rain, which mingled with my tears on their way making my path slippery,hard to find, Oh,mindless poetess! Why don't you try to read my mind? Oh,careless poetess! When you scramble for words to write, but they stop flowing into your mind please don't put me in your mouth and bite, for that is too much painful to me instead just touch me with your lips, Oh,careless poetess! Why don't you give me occasional kiss? Oh,my dear poetess! from today please care me a little more, and write for me that fairy tale poem with all starry imagination of your, please do it before it is too late for old age is turning me weak and frail, Oh,my dear poetess! Why not you start today that fairy tale? © kashinath karmakar ======================== Placement:None;(April 2011) Contest:Beseech Sponsor:Paula Swanson By:kashinath karmakar (4th April 2011)

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Date: 4/6/2011 7:59:00 AM
Very creative approach to the "Beseech" contest, Kash! I love the title and the way the pen "speaks" to the poet. Very nice shift in energy in the final verse too. This should do well in the contest, my friend. Wishing you success with this great poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/5/2011 11:12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one very much..Great personification of the writer's pen..Excellent job...If an entry in the contest, it should be in the winners' circle..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I have posted a contest with tangible prizes..Sara
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Date: 4/5/2011 10:50:00 AM
Awesome, really fantastic Kash!! Loved your approach to the contest. Wishing you all the best as well ;)
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Date: 4/5/2011 9:10:00 AM
this is a real whooot, kashi.. tremendous scaling of poetic heights! winning piece for me! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:46:00 PM
Kashinath, I am glad you took this form to heart and tried your hand at it. You did a magnificent job with it. I hope this ranks very high for you! (7, I won't forget!)
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Date: 4/4/2011 3:09:00 PM
Simply amazing Kashinath.. wonderful words with dynamic statements on the poetess ... superb contest entry luv.. good luck with this expressive creative piece my friend..luv..
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:17:00 PM
funny poem....hope the pen is everflowing for you!! Like an artesian well.
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Date: 4/4/2011 12:34:00 PM
wonderful write Kashinath! Enjoyed this very much:)
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Date: 4/4/2011 12:00:00 PM
Very very creative and litling verses you have penned,kashinath
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