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Hey Commander

Hey Commander Hey Commander can’t you see The way forward that’s meant to be Standing there waiting for the cue Your the one who should know what to do The light is on and the camera rolls Take your time and explain the goals What is meant to be we will see Do we want to live our life free So Commander make your call Don’t just stand there when we hear all You supposed to know once the bell rings Go ahead say it’s safe when in it swings What to do when it goes bad Your modelling should have shown a red flag Then again ask was it meant to be Go quietly as the Commander do you see. © Paul Warren Poetry

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