Hey Commander
Hey Commander
Hey Commander can’t you see
The way forward that’s meant to be
Standing there waiting for the cue
Your the one who should know what to do
The light is on and the camera rolls
Take your time and explain the goals
What is meant to be we will see
Do we want to live our life free
So Commander make your call
Don’t just stand there when we hear all
You supposed to know once the bell rings
Go ahead say it’s safe when in it swings
What to do when it goes bad
Your modelling should have shown a red flag
Then again ask was it meant to be
Go quietly as the Commander do you see.
© Paul Warren Poetry
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