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Hey Momma, He walks. Hey Daddy, He talks. Hey Sister, He said his first word today. Hey Brother, He sleeps. Hey Momma, He walks away. Hey Daddy, He talks…so quietly. Hey Sister, He said, “Good bye.” Hey Brother, He won’t wake up.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/29/2010 4:31:00 PM
This is just so wonderful line poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 5/29/2010 12:41:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family.. enjoyed your creative write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:44:00 PM
Beautifully written with very few words. Can feel the loss!
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