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He's the Devil

there’s a boy with fire in his eyes and trouble in his veins. his words are mischief his smile is the devil and he has you trapped. every waking moment you can’t stop thinking about the touch, his skin against yours his hands in your hair, what would happen if you could just hold him close and kiss him.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/6/2017 3:18:00 AM
Well I really like the way you descirbe the scene and your feelings, this is the evidence of a good poet, you are a really good poet, well seeing the dates of your poem, one thing is clear that you aren t new, but you stop writing poems, well don t ever stop writing, you are a very good poet, and do tell me when you ll post your new poem I really like reading your poems
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Date: 2/28/2016 9:27:00 AM
Hannah Tobin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 6:23:00 PM
HANNAH, enjoyed reading your poem. Love **SKAT**
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