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'he's So Fine'

‘HE’S SO FINE’ a song from the 60s sung by the Chiffons

A wet afternoon in early December
I yearn for the summer I can hardly remember

Such a dismal day so grey and so dark 
Feeling like daylight never made a start

‘Sounds of the Sixties’ was blaring from my radio
songs from our youth we had loved so long ago

A few months back I‘d sent a mail; a new spot on the show
called ‘Magic Moments’; a dedication played upon the radio

Imagine my surprise to hear the DJ speak our names
Recalling how we’d met my love; you set my heart aflame

The song that I had chosen; a special tune of yours and mine
was playing through my radio; The Chiffons, ‘He’s So Fine’

Tears were rolling down my face, recalling when we met
A dance hall on a summer’s night; a night I'll not forget

As the DJ says your name, memories come flooding back
This era was ours; those songs of our youth; he plays our youthful soundtrack

Such joyful memories pervade my mind, listening to the Chiffons
Though sadly listening all alone; ten years have passed since you’ve been gone

But I can hear and see your smile and know you’re listening all the while
For you were truly ‘Oh So Fine’ my dearest husband, eternally mine

Written 2nd December 2018 

Contest Name STRAND CHOICE 6
Sponsor Brian Strand
3rd Place


Written when my request was read out on 1st December 2018, by Tony Blackburn on Sounds of the Sixties ‘Magic Moments’ spot... and I even won the 'Nearly Gold Medalion' what a lucky girl, haha!

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Date: 1/26/2020 5:57:00 PM
Ann congrats once again on your win!;)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/27/2020 5:55:00 AM
Bless you dear Brenda for your congrats. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 12/2/2018 3:33:00 PM
Lovely piece Ann, yes the 60s had something special today's pop can't compare with.Have a great week, Gordon
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/3/2018 12:03:00 AM
Thank you so much Gordon. It was great when Tony Blackburn read out my message and played our song, it brought tears to my eyes, but they were tears of joy as those wonderful times returned and as you say the 60s music is special. Keep warm Gordon, kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 12/2/2018 1:53:00 PM
What a lovely surprise Ann, there's no better era than the 60s. Tom.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/2/2018 2:02:00 PM
Yes it was great to hear my request read out yesterday morning, it really made my day and inspired my poem. You are so right about the 60s, the music was and still is wonderful. Thank you so much for your comments Tom, Kindest thoughts Ann x

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