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He's Fully loaded

Stinky-Butt crawls
like a snail and leaves a trail.
My baby brother.




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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/5/2015 12:52:00 PM
Endless possibilities with haiku, and of course, your thoughts. quite interesting.
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/5/2015 1:09:00 PM
Thanks, Iris, yes, that's true about the haiku. I hope you are having a wonderful 4th of July weekend.
Date: 7/1/2015 12:01:00 AM
This is really funny and creatively written, too! Great job, Darlene :)
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/1/2015 3:49:00 AM
Thanks, Laura, past memories make good poems, I guess.
Date: 6/23/2015 7:35:00 AM
this is so cute and really funny bit so sweet!!!! ~Olive ELoisa
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 6/23/2015 7:59:00 AM
Thanks, Olive, old memories make good poems. Who knows why certain ones stick in the mind! ~~Darlene
Date: 6/23/2015 2:42:00 AM
Excellent penned so funny....A.M.
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 6/23/2015 8:00:00 AM
Thanks, Afolabi, for commenting and reading my poem. I enjoyed reading yours, too.
Date: 6/22/2015 3:28:00 PM
hahaha. GOOD ONE love your title for it.
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 6/22/2015 7:22:00 PM
I was remembering a childhood incident of my little brother crawling my way and I could smell him coming. I'm glad you liked the title.
Date: 6/20/2015 9:34:00 AM
This is so funny!
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 6/20/2015 9:51:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Richard, and thanks!
Date: 6/20/2015 9:23:00 AM
How witty, love the humor, a 7 Hugs Eve
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 6/20/2015 9:54:00 AM
Thanks, Eve, after all the violence in this world, we need the humor. ~~Darlene
Date: 6/19/2015 1:55:00 PM
Wow! Clever! Unusual topic, may I say, Darlene:) I like. // paul
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 6/19/2015 4:35:00 PM
Thanks Paul, I thought saying dirty diaper, would be too obvious. I guess, "fully Loaded" should say it all. ~~Darlene
Date: 6/19/2015 9:07:00 AM
ha ha ha:-) hugs jan xx
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 6/19/2015 4:37:00 PM
I guess that brother is saying, "Mom, Come quick!"