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He's Fully Loaded

Stinky-Butt crawls
like a snail and leaves a trail.
My baby brother.




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babybrotherfunnypollutionhaiku

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

July 5, 2015 at 12:52 PM

Endless possibilities with haiku, and of course, your thoughts. quite interesting.

Darlene Gifford

July 5, 2015 at 1:09 PM

Thanks, Iris, yes, that's true about the haiku. I hope you are having a wonderful 4th of July weekend.

Laura Leiser

July 1, 2015 at 12:01 AM

This is really funny and creatively written, too! Great job, Darlene :)

Darlene Gifford

July 1, 2015 at 3:49 AM

Thanks, Laura, past memories make good poems, I guess.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 23, 2015 at 7:35 AM

this is so cute and really funny bit so sweet!!!! ~Olive ELoisa

Darlene Gifford

June 23, 2015 at 7:59 AM

Thanks, Olive, old memories make good poems. Who knows why certain ones stick in the mind! ~~Darlene

Afolabi Muideen

June 23, 2015 at 2:42 AM

Excellent penned so funny....A.M.

Darlene Gifford

June 23, 2015 at 8:00 AM

Thanks, Afolabi, for commenting and reading my poem. I enjoyed reading yours, too.

Andrea Dietrich

June 22, 2015 at 3:28 PM

hahaha. GOOD ONE love your title for it.

Darlene Gifford

June 22, 2015 at 7:22 PM

I was remembering a childhood incident of my little brother crawling my way and I could smell him coming. I'm glad you liked the title.

Richard Lamoureux

June 20, 2015 at 9:34 AM

This is so funny!

Darlene Gifford

June 20, 2015 at 9:51 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Richard, and thanks!

Eve Roper

June 20, 2015 at 9:23 AM

How witty, love the humor, a 7 Hugs Eve

Darlene Gifford

June 20, 2015 at 9:54 AM

Thanks, Eve, after all the violence in this world, we need the humor. ~~Darlene

Paul Callus

June 19, 2015 at 1:55 PM

Wow! Clever! Unusual topic, may I say, Darlene:) I like. // paul

Darlene Gifford

June 19, 2015 at 4:35 PM

Thanks Paul, I thought saying dirty diaper, would be too obvious. I guess, "fully Loaded" should say it all. ~~Darlene

Jan Allison

June 19, 2015 at 9:07 AM

ha ha ha:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene Gifford

June 19, 2015 at 4:37 PM

I guess that brother is saying, "Mom, Come quick!"

He's Fully Loaded

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