He's Elavating Me
I saw it all and was in awe
The way his sticky glaze melted on my warm rising stars.
Just keep breathing is what I let him know.
As the waves rose up and down...the intensity of the moment made our beings glow
Taking me up and more up, that's when I saw it all.
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