He's Elavating Me

I saw it all and was in awe
The way his sticky glaze melted on my warm rising stars. 
Just keep breathing is what I let him know. 
As the waves rose up and down...the intensity of the moment made our beings glow 
Taking me up and more up, that's when I saw it all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 15, 2016 at 8:03 AM
Love the way the beginning is the end.
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