Bryn Strudwick Poet Tetractys

Hero's Return

HERO’S RETURN

His childhood sweetheart shyly awaits him
Her GI boy
Home at last
Mother
Though
Can’t
Hold back
Siblings too
Hoping to find
His canvas bag stuffed full of Hershey Bars

9th February 2021
Picture No. 3
40 Syllables
Double Tetractys 7 contest
Sponsor - Eve Roper

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Jeanne Mcgee March 2, 2021 at 2:28 PM I didn't even need the picture to imagine the scene from your chosen words. congrats on the win Bryn.

Jan Allison March 1, 2021 at 10:28 AM lovely interpretation of the picture Bryn, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith March 1, 2021 at 9:20 AM Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful take on the picture. I also did this one in a different write. Enjoy your win with blessings...................

Linda Alice Fowler March 1, 2021 at 7:41 AM Congratulations on the win Bryn! Linda

Newton Ranaweera March 1, 2021 at 5:43 AM Congratulations, Bryn, on your Top Placement for this impressively visual representation!!

Alexis Y. March 1, 2021 at 5:28 AM Hi Bryn, A reasonable interpretation of the painting. Well done. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Beata Agustin March 1, 2021 at 12:24 AM Wow! Congrats! God bless you.

Eve Roper February 28, 2021 at 10:07 PM Bryn, thank you for creating and entering my contest. Your poem made me visualize the siblings going through his canvas bag. Do visit my Double Tetractys 7 blog. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve