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Hero's Return

HERO’S RETURN His childhood sweetheart shyly awaits him Her GI boy Home at last Mother Though Can’t Hold back Siblings too Hoping to find His canvas bag stuffed full of Hershey Bars 9th February 2021 Picture No. 3 40 Syllables Double Tetractys 7 contest Sponsor - Eve Roper

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 3/2/2021 2:28:00 PM

I didn't even need the picture to imagine the scene from your chosen words. congrats on the win Bryn.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/1/2021 10:28:00 AM

lovely interpretation of the picture Bryn, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/1/2021 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful take on the picture. I also did this one in a different write. Enjoy your win with blessings...................

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/1/2021 7:41:00 AM

Congratulations on the win Bryn! Linda

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 3/1/2021 5:43:00 AM

Congratulations, Bryn, on your Top Placement for this impressively visual representation!!

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/1/2021 5:28:00 AM

Hi Bryn, A reasonable interpretation of the painting. Well done. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/1/2021 12:24:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! God bless you.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2021 10:07:00 PM

Bryn, thank you for creating and entering my contest. Your poem made me visualize the siblings going through his canvas bag. Do visit my Double Tetractys 7 blog. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve