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Hern Voile

. Glisten Mine eyne be converted Blind hern dishabille transformed mine see yesss through that voile Of course she caused mine blind yet mine squinted je' gently *voile: diaphanous clothing ;)

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Date: 8/30/2009 5:56:00 PM
such sweet sound..and picture made...in minds eye did place the gaze...'pon brow and lip such sweet sound did slip...as if..as if to delay your preciuos gaze.
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Date: 8/29/2009 7:42:00 AM
Your writes are always unique and good. Love your poetry my man..good work.
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Date: 8/29/2009 7:21:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem James. Light but excitingly sexy. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2009 4:58:00 AM
Very revealing words. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/28/2009 8:17:00 PM
Such a sexy, romantic poem ....like temptation that cannot be resisted ~ Done so well James!!
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