James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Hern Voile

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                  Glisten
      Mine eyne be converted 
                   Blind
   hern dishabille transformed
                mine see

                   yesss
           through that voile

Of course she caused mine blind

                     yet 
             mine squinted

                      je'
                   gently



*voile: diaphanous clothing ;)

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Debbie Guzzi August 30, 2009 at 5:56 PM such sweet sound..and picture made...in minds eye did place the gaze...'pon brow and lip such sweet sound did slip...as if..as if to delay your preciuos gaze. James Peranteau June 1, 2025 at 8:37 PM ')

Christopher Higgins August 29, 2009 at 7:42 AM Your writes are always unique and good. Love your poetry my man..good work.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 29, 2009 at 7:21 AM I enjoyed reading this poem James. Light but excitingly sexy. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick August 29, 2009 at 4:58 AM Very revealing words. Keep writing. Sara

Carrie Richards August 28, 2009 at 8:17 PM Such a sexy, romantic poem ....like temptation that cannot be resisted ~ Done so well James!!