James Peranteau Poet Elegy

hern echo hear'd

.

                       in thuh distance
                            there'z uh 
                             banging

                              pauze

                              thump

                    i feel'd thuh lump
                        in her throat

                             "hhuh
                               hun"

                              mine 
                     hear'd      drip
                               hern
                               drip
                               drip




*Sara Kendrick girl,   ')

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Sara Kendrick December 14, 2025 at 9:26 AM Okay, James. I have no idea of what you speak except my name is attached. LOL..Thanks for the poem. Sara K James Peranteau December 14, 2025 at 10:39 AM so, yeah, in soup mail....did you ever read my posts regarding my new form, "dip"..."intro: New Form "dip""... there'z part 1...2...3...and..read this rest in your soupmail...tiz 'bout your heart's think regard thuh death uv your mate ...much love