Notes About The Poem

Written, June 4, 2025
For The Contest, “Spin A Shadorma”
Sponsor, Nette Onclaud

Hermit

all alone

in his quiet space

known as home

he survives --

despite his name, he's a friend 

our cute hermit crab
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Date: 6/7/2025 4:30:00 PM
Love the cute ending in this. Congrats
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Date: 6/6/2025 9:18:00 PM
I love this. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/4/2025 4:18:00 PM
O Sandy! Did you name him Alfredo?
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/5/2025 1:46:00 PM
No, although that name is popular, we named it "Hermie."
Date: 6/4/2025 3:52:00 PM
Under his shell, the hermit loves his space!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/5/2025 1:46:00 PM
Yes, we enjoyed watching it! Thanks for stopping by! Hugs, Sandra
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