Heretical Hanks

There once was a poet named Hanks
Who loved to play metrical pranks;
A master of rhyme
And sonnets sublime
He'd nevertheless be the first to confess
That his messing with scansion caused lavish expansion 
Of ultimate lines which knew no confines,
Defying all schools of rhythmical rules, 
Resulting in poetic angst!


01/10/18


'A form of mischief contest' : sponsored by Nina Parmenter

I hope you can appreciate that heretical Hanks has conformed to the Limerick's rhyming regulations AABBA but taken huge liberties with the rhythm and acceptable final line  word allowance!

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Date: 5/27/2020 8:05:00 PM
Wendy, your form of mischief is a winner in my book! Loved the surprise (albeit carefully rhymed and metered) ending! Brought a big smile to my face, and adding it to my faves. A real treat!
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Date: 10/4/2018 7:56:00 PM
This brought a smile to my face! I love limericks and I love this one
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/26/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for your positive feedback,Timothy.
Date: 10/1/2018 6:04:00 PM
Fantastic mischief you have made with this one. I love how you misbehaved.
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