Heretical Gravity

Written for “Autumn’s Breath” — Regina Mcintosh
18 August 2026


—Autumn Reverses the World— The streams, insurgent against gravity, ascend The hills, as though the sea reclaimed the blue it lent; The roots, abjuring their chthonic covenant, climb Through loam towards empyrean immensities beyond time; The leaves, renouncing their ordained descent, return To boughs, as though departure were a wound the trees unlearn; The orchard, having spent its aureate inheritance, distils From severance a green no summer’s plenitude fulfils; At dusk, the firmament dilates beyond the visible sphere, Whilst shadows, severed from their bodies, migrate where No geography survives the sovereignty of light; And frost, beneath the rose, engenders a subterranean night; A seed, still unborn, remembers what birth has yet to know, And thrusts its darkness skyward, making earth overflow; Then Time, divested of its forward-moving throne, recoils through every fallen leaf towards the future it disowned; I breathe—and autumn enters not my lungs, but the place Where being precedes its name, and becoming outlives its trace; For Autumn does not breathe the dying year into its end— It breathes the unborn through all we call the dead.
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September 6, 2026 at 2:37 AM
Dear Mohit, heartfelt congratulations on your contest win for this very well-crafted poem.
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September 6, 2026 at 2:55 AM
Dear Sir Poet, 🌹 Thy gracious words do humble me beyond mortal speech. I receive them not as praise, but as benediction—as though some benignant star had stooped from the empyrean to cast its aureate hush upon my poor quill. ✍️ If aught in these verses hath found lodgement in thine eye, I deem thy reading the rarer gift; for a poem, once sunder’d from its maker, is but an ember till another soul doth breathe upon its hidden fire. 🔥 Thus am I ever humbled by thy words. I treasure them as ineffable graces, laid quietly where the heart remembereth what the tongue cannot requite. 🥰✨
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September 5, 2026 at 10:09 AM
Such eloquence!! Congrats on a well deserved win
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September 5, 2026 at 10:39 AM
For thy sincere readings of my poor verses, Amaranthine Andrea, I remain most deeply grateful. ’Tis no small benediction when another soul lingers awhile over the strange little worlds a poet labours to conjure from ink and silence. Thy attentive reading lends my words a warmth they could never summon alone; for a poem may be born of the quill, yet it is only in another soul’s reading that it truly comes alive. And thou hast given mine that second life. 🙌 ✨Thou call’st me eloquent; yet hear my plaint: Oft what I feel exceeds the tongue’s purlieu; The soul knows immensities the lexicon cannot paint, And words grow evanescent where the heart burns true; So, desperate, I forge strange syllables unknown— How mad! I mint new worlds when one word cannot be shown.✨
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September 5, 2026 at 5:04 AM
I have returned to offer you congratulations for your placement, Mohit. It's wonderful to see your creative talent recognized by others.
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September 5, 2026 at 6:26 AM
Revered Lady Lin, Thy return to offer thy congratulations touches me more deeply than these few words may confess. To have one such as thee pause twice at my humble verse is itself a quiet honour. 😊 And thy earlier reading—that I had made Autumn a protector where others behold a villain—remains with me. Perhaps that was the little heresy I most wished the poem to whisper: that what appears to us as ending may yet be the earth’s most secret beginning. 🤔 Thy gracious words on my vocabulary and “just the right amount of archaic language” I shall treasure with particular fondness. I am, after all, but a keeper of an ancient music, and it heartens me immeasurably when another ear hears even a faint echo of it. 🥰 Thank thee, Generous Lin, for returning—not merely with congratulations, but with such generous warmth. It is a rare grace to have one’s work seen; rarer still, to have it understood. ✨
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August 18, 2026 at 1:12 PM
How masterfully you have designated Autumn as a protector while most, including myself have always thought it a villain because in its time leaves wrinkle and die. Your poetry is outstanding in vocabulary and just the right amount of archaic language.
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August 19, 2026 at 7:07 AM
Then honoured am I by this unearned privilege, and thy words are my command. If thou wouldst have me call thee Lin, gladly shall I do so; and yet forgive me if my old-fashioned courtesy sometimes outruns my tongue. To have thy blessing upon what I call the “ancient music” is a grace I shall treasure. Such recognition from one who has read my poor verses with genuine warmth is no small gift to this poet. Thank thee, Clement Lin, for thy kindness—and for making thy generosity feel so beautifully unceremonious.
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August 19, 2026 at 6:31 AM
Mohit, you are very welcome and I must say your grasp and use of following the ancient music in your writing is a blessing to treasure. Just call me Lin, please although I acknowledge your gentlemanly manners.
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August 19, 2026 at 6:22 AM
🌸 Esteemed Ma’am Lin, Thy gracious words have moved me beyond my poor power of utterance. That thou shouldst behold Autumn not as the herald of extinction, but as the secret keeper of what death cannot wholly finish, is itself a benediction upon these humble lines. And for thy kindness towards my vocabulary and elder tongue, I am deeply beholden. I fear I but follow the ancient music whenever the matter at hand grows too vast for the common speech of men; the archaic word then seems less a choice than a vestige of some forgotten bell still sounding beneath the language. Thank thee, Ma’am Lin, for reading with so generous an eye, and for discerning within my Autumn that which I had hoped another heart might, perchance, discover. With deepest gratitude and abiding respect, 🙏✨ Mohit Mitra
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