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Here's One For Those That Want Feelings

As the voluptuous water flows over Niagara Falls My love for you pours from my heart When your dam diverts my love I could bawl Trapped love that you could receive from the start "All my hugs and all my kisses Boy oh boy what you've been missin' Oh boy, oh boy" Like the fig leaf that mixes its scent with the rose My love for you gives forth its scented perfume As the sudden freeze of fall stops the fig in troes So does your rejection stop my love's eau de parfum "All my hugs and all my kisses Boy oh boy what you've been missin' Oh boy, oh boy" (Refrain is not original probably will remember from song of years ago. I don't remember the name of the song or the artist.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/14/2010 12:15:00 PM
Your writing is amazing you are swiftly becoming one of my most favorite poets and thanks for your encouragement and support; That first line was golden =)
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Date: 2/6/2010 7:13:00 AM
Most def Oh Boy by " Buddy Holly " > interesting take Sara >> James
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Date: 2/4/2010 4:55:00 PM
Yes--there is a lot of feeling in here. Sara--thank-you for being graphic, truthful and feisty and for being generous!
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Date: 2/4/2010 4:30:00 AM
Sara, Thank you for commenting on my spring Hiku. You have so may superb haikus, bursting with imagination and image, I wouldnt know where to start commenting!
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Date: 2/3/2010 6:43:00 PM
but you've used the refrain so well. and the images also . John H Loving III
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Date: 2/3/2010 6:19:00 PM
These words would melt any heart, Sara! I enjoyed this very much! Peace, audrey
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Date: 2/3/2010 3:07:00 PM
thank you sara for your comments .... I like the discriptive words you use . "the blue room" is based on actual events happy writing
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Date: 2/3/2010 1:57:00 PM
cute one mom, it is the love month!!
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Date: 2/3/2010 8:10:00 AM
A very good job Sara, that's telling it like it is. Stopping love the source of all things, is daming up life's flow. May the mind be renewed. Sincerely, love, Moses
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Date: 2/3/2010 7:30:00 AM
well, gosh, I was thinking this was for the beastlemania contest or something! This was a fun read and some great images in it, Sara! thanks for your comment to me on homemaker. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/3/2010 7:19:00 AM
Great words and I think the refrain is from Buddy Holly ... not sure though... nice interaction with your verses...luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/3/2010 6:42:00 AM
Lovely write Sara...The artist is Buddy Holly..and the words you changed just a little, so it's a Buddy and Sara combo :) TAH
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Date: 2/3/2010 6:39:00 AM
Oh yes...I remember the song...and your poem does justice ....what a fun valentine poem!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/3/2010 6:30:00 AM
As always I enjoy reading your material. Thanks for sharing with me. Have a great day! Scarlett
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