Jerry T Curtis Poet Rhyme

Here's One For the Older Soupers

Last week my foot was hurting
The next day was my neck
after that my shoulder
I've sure become a wreck
Currently my knee hurt 
but I know it won't for long
It's sure to be forgotten 
as a new pain comes along

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Lindsay Laurie September 14, 2018 at 1:30 AM G'day Jerry … this is why senior citizen club meetings should be held in a chemist shop with a chemist on standby - thanks Mate - Lindsay

Nette Onclaud January 22, 2015 at 1:47 PM you are young at heart, jerry... fascinating work about our council of elders!... you charm.. huggs Jerry T Curtis January 22, 2015 at 3:58 PM Thank You Nette huggs back at you

Dr.Ram Mehta January 22, 2015 at 9:19 AM Enjoyed the humor, Jerry. For a moment It's me, 80 years old

Emile Pinet January 22, 2015 at 8:11 AM Good structure with a natural cadence that welcomes the reader and enlist further exploration. Life can be depressing at times and it seems that you have had more than your rightful share of misfortune, may the future be more promising. Emile.