Here It Comes

Storm warning, record rain
Jet stream, El Nino waters 
Wind gusts and mudslides 






For Brian Strand's Poetry of the Noun contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 6:07 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Linda. Have a wonderful week and may you have baskets full of inspiration come your way. Love, Carol
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March 13, 2011 at 5:04 PM
Congrats Linda on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. wonderful words to share with us all my friend with luv.. hope u are well and happy ...
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February 21, 2010 at 4:38 AM
Hi Linda! i see you snuk in alot of poems while I wasn't looking. I thought you were on vacation ...but it was me! (snuk past tense of sneak= sneak snaked snuk):) Your comment even has a great combo Epulaeryu/Haiku in it! And a good one...Maybe it's above -on to your others. Sure am glad to see you writing! Your friend Robert
Bono Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 7:38 AM
Just wanted to stop and say hello.hope all is well with you.I placed in a couple contest.Ya me.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 7:58 PM
Terrific Haiku Linda ... very descriptive and awesome ... visual scene... enjoyed .. luv.. Linda-Marie..
K. Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 1:50 AM
You've built the tension really well in this haiku, Linda--looking forward to reading more of your talented writes :) thanks as well for your comments on my poems :)
George   Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 9:26 AM
You paint a solid vivid image of that horrific event with this Haiku, Linda. thank you for sharing your poetic talent once again, and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie
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January 24, 2010 at 10:26 PM
Hey, this was pretty good, Linda. I guess I had missed it. You did very well with just nouns. It was not an easy challenge. Luv, andrea
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January 24, 2010 at 7:05 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative perspective. The title is fitting for the poem. I see you joined our Soup family last month. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
Bono Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 2:49 PM
Wishing you a great day.
Hilliker Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 11:02 PM
Well written Haiku. Enjoyed it!
Culverhouse Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 3:00 PM
Sounds like Haiti, good writing enjoyed reading .
Bono Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 12:22 PM
Hopefully not for real.I hate nature's fierce wheather.
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January 22, 2010 at 4:01 PM
Excellent entry for Brian's contest, Linda. You have described well the scene on the US West Coast right now. Our prayers are well invested in asking that lives be spared during the awful mudslides we've seen on television. Outstanding haiku! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry today Linda. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol
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January 21, 2010 at 2:04 AM
This is a great poetry of the noun Haiku, Linda well expressing the developments of hazardous weather there. You have succeeded in putting the reader (at least me) on edge concerning the coming events with few words. Great! -Robert
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January 20, 2010 at 11:52 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Linda.Rgds Brian
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January 20, 2010 at 11:30 PM
Very neat, no doubts about whats in store. well done...Margaret
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