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Here In The Midst Of Summer

Here in the midst of summer surrounded by the lakeland feels what glory to look out upon makes one cry out to tell There's a stillness in the air so silent, one can hardly hear the sun shines through the clouds warms the air, listen in your ear Often you feel like wandering taking in all that's freshly new this is a beautiful creation, you see divinely born, you see right on cue This is indeed a wonder of wonders one has to be still to take it in on the first day, when Adam fell what God had made is marred by sin Pray to be taken to that original that first moment so real in time when all was just perfectly sublime dream on and feel it in its prime (Just some thoughts spending in the English Lake District a few weeks ago.)

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Date: 7/31/2025 5:49:00 PM
Lovely, uplifting and spirit filled message here in your poem, Gordon. It is so refreshing to hear these words and think upon that time when all was perfect between man and our Creator God. What a precious and pleasing thought. Thank you for sharing the thoughts of that moment with us through your meaningful and inspiring poetry, my friend. God's blessing be with you, Bill
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/1/2025 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Bill, Glad you enjoyed this piece and found it so meaningful and inspiring, it's my first piece for many months having gone through a lean and dry spell of not writing. Have a blessed day,Gordon
Date: 7/31/2025 3:01:00 PM
Very lovely Gordon, I enjoyed reading your poem. Wow, you are right, the beauty marred by the fall of Adam and Eve, but beautiful. To think of Eden, in this shadow of the beauty that once was and again will someday be is a wonderful thought. Thank you for sharing moments of your tranquil trip to the lake in your beautiful poem. Very lovely.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/1/2025 7:52:00 AM
Thanks BJ, Glad you enjoyed this piece and found it very lovely, Trust all is well with you, blessings, Gordon
Date: 7/31/2025 2:12:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. If Adam came back today, I wonder what he would think. Have a wonderful day writing away...............
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/1/2025 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Paula, Glad you enjoyed this piece of mine, an interesting thought what would Adam think of this world now. Take care, blessings always,Gordon

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