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Here Comes the Judge

When God made us did He say It's fine to throw your life away? Did He say that you can do Anything that you want to? Destroy yourselves, Destroy each other, Destroy your brother, sister, mother. Destroy the Earth, Destroy the Stars, Destroy the Planets - Even Mars Or did He say that you should love All on earth and up above So full of greed - so shallow too, I wonder what He'll do with you When He decides the time has come For you to know what you have done. Myself, I say forgive you, But only He decides, Atrocities like this Demand that He presides. THERE IS ONLY ONE JUDGE AND THAT'S GOD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/8/2014 2:53:00 PM
Marilyn, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/7/2014 4:23:00 PM
Marilyn Monroe & Ingar Stevens: Marilyn Stevens ~ Beautiful! *:*(* ... There's Going To Be A Whole Lot Of Cleaning Up Isn't There ? If This World Myself It's Tales As Beyound, Have Not Balanced Atop The Scales In My My My ? Than I Can't Tell You What Has: Bizarre Insane And Crazy On You....Smile, It's All Good Baby Girl! ~ Congrats On Your Beauty's Pro Bo Feature: Super Cool! ~ Love John .... Ps., Here Comes `THE JUDGE.` *
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Date: 2/26/2014 3:08:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Marilyn - I choose your first great written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/26/2014 2:39:00 AM
Marilyn, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/25/2014 5:54:00 PM
Welcome to the site. Good write. One suggestion: all pronouns in reference to God such as each "he" you have in your write should be spelled with the first letter capitalized.
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Date: 2/25/2014 5:45:00 PM
Marilyn yes there is going to be a day of judgement that is why we need to repent and take Jesus as our saviour thank you for this reminder in this well written poem.
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:34:00 PM
Hi Marilyn, Good piece here with a strong message. Well put together. Kevin
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