Jan Allison Poet Limerick

Notes About The Poem

My thanks to Andrea for assisting me get the meter correct:-)

 

Herbie Rides Again

Two autos both tried to have sex.
A pity they both were such wrecks!
With great apprehension,
One lost its suspension.
Old banger sex – oh so complex!


12~21~14
Contest: East Jesus
Sponsor: Roy Jerden
Checked using how many Syllables 8,8,6,6,8
~awarded 3rd place~

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

1 2

Debbie Guzzi January 3, 2015 at 7:46 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Jan Allison January 3, 2015 at 8:02 PM Thanks so much for dropping by Debbie:-) Hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath January 3, 2015 at 7:31 AM Congrats on your beautiful win, my lovely friend. Really a nice poem enjoyed. Loved always,bl Jan Allison January 3, 2015 at 8:40 AM Thanks for dropping by BL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta January 3, 2015 at 5:51 AM Congrats on the fine win and nice take on the theme, Jan Allison January 3, 2015 at 8:39 AM Thanks so much Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 3, 2015 at 4:37 AM Ha Ha Ha We must have car p**** market.Love Jan. Great win. Jan Allison January 3, 2015 at 4:45 AM Thanks Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton January 3, 2015 at 1:24 AM congrats on worthy win Jan love your humour hugs Jan Allison January 3, 2015 at 4:23 AM Thanks Shadow I try and write with humour whenever i can:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper January 3, 2015 at 12:25 AM Congratulate you on your win. Wonderful poem, It's Funny :) 7 my dear friend Blessings Jan Allison January 3, 2015 at 4:23 AM thanks so much Eve:-) Am thinking of you my friend xx:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A January 2, 2015 at 11:50 PM Jan, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~ Jan Allison January 3, 2015 at 4:21 AM Many thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan x

Robert Stoner Jr January 2, 2015 at 7:05 PM lol Jan nice, congratulations on this win Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 7:14 PM Thanks Robert I have loved reading the winning poems all so unique in style and content:-) hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker January 2, 2015 at 4:08 PM Hi Jan, I'm returning to congratulate you on what I knew was a winner when I first commented. Good for you. Keep up the good work. Earl Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 4:13 PM Thanks so much Earl I know Roy enjoys limericks so thought I would try the fun angle - this time it paid off:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight January 2, 2015 at 1:47 PM Hi Jan, I laughed so hard when I read this! I enjoyed your imagery...very spicy compared to mine for the same picture! Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 2:04 PM Isn't it wonderful that we can have such unique poems about the same image - that my friend is the joy of writing:-) Many congrats again to you:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 2, 2015 at 1:09 PM WAY to GO. At least your humor paid off in this one, Jan. Mine hardly rated. haha. Yours was hilarious!! Congrats. Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 1:13 PM Thanks Andrea - I am delighted with my placement - knowing Roy has a great love of limericks helped on this occasion :-) Hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus January 2, 2015 at 10:47 AM Excellent limerick, Jan!!! Well done...you ought to be on stage! Congratulations! hugs // paul Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 11:03 AM LOl Paul - so glad you appreciate my humour:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode January 2, 2015 at 10:42 AM I got a chuckle with this Jan, sex? Poet, poet ,poet; what wonder can you not author? Congrats great Poet....huggs Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 10:44 AM I am pretty new to writing only started 10 months ago - lovely to think of myself as a poet - one day a book would be my dream come true but now is not the right time in my life:-) hugs jan xx

Meg Anderson January 2, 2015 at 10:32 AM Congrats to you as well! Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 10:40 AM Thanks Meg this poem makes me giggle:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May January 2, 2015 at 9:55 AM Congrats on a great win Jan... Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 10:11 AM Thanks so much Joseph and Happy New Year:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne January 2, 2015 at 9:46 AM Congratulations on your win with this brilliant limerick. Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 10:11 AM Thank you again:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne January 2, 2015 at 9:44 AM Wow look at you Jan another top win for you. 2015 is starting on a very positive note. Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 10:10 AM Thanks as ever for your encouragement and friendship:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 2, 2015 at 9:41 AM Great humour Jan! Congrats on ur win! Wish u a very happy n prosperous new year ! Thnx for ur visits to my page wud always encouraging words! Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 10:10 AM Oh just seen its been judged thanks for being the bearer of good news:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux December 23, 2014 at 8:15 AM Ha ha, maybe he should have tried lubricating those rusty old nuts! Jan Allison December 23, 2014 at 10:58 AM Richard BEHAVE!!! lol hugs jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans December 22, 2014 at 6:16 PM I love the title, I love the poem, I love your humour. Hilarious Jan. Jan Allison December 22, 2014 at 6:20 PM I thought of the title when we were walking back from Carols by Candlelight last night lol - glad you enjoyed my silly write:-) hugs jan xxx

M. L. Kiser December 22, 2014 at 1:29 PM You made me almost pee my panties. It did cheer me up a bit. Jan Allison December 22, 2014 at 2:37 PM ML that made me laugh out loud! I think that is my favourite comment EVER on one of my poems:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jack Ellison December 22, 2014 at 11:59 AM Do you think old Lyric Man actually saw two cars going at it??? What was ya drinking, Dave my man... want some of that stuff! Jan, this was fun... gl! Love and hugs, Brother Jack XXX Jan Allison December 22, 2014 at 12:02 PM Thanks for dropping by jack I do appreciate it - as for Dave - who knows lol - maybe he'd been on the sherry when he wrote the comment lol:-) Hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne December 22, 2014 at 10:14 AM love this Jan a fav for me! Jan Allison December 22, 2014 at 11:13 AM Thanks my friend - I see you've been busy only had time to read one:-( Hugs jan x

Joseph May December 22, 2014 at 7:01 AM Great limerick Jan...best wishes...hugs Jan Allison December 22, 2014 at 7:39 AM Thanks Joseph I still manage to write with humour:-) Hugs jan xxx

Sara Kendrick December 22, 2014 at 5:56 AM Reads like a winner..Very creative on your part..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Jan Allison December 22, 2014 at 7:38 AM Thanks Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

1 2