Her Words

At times when life is hard,
Her words can help me through.
She held me close and said,
‘My boy, I’m proud of you.’

It’s been so long and yet,
My memory’s as clear.
I hear her tender voice
And see her face so dear.

My Gran was loved so much,
Her heart as good as gold.
I stoop and touch her name,
But granite’s hard and cold.

Her grave is grey and still,
Between the elm and yew.
I leave a rose and say,
‘And I was proud of you.’


Posted just too late for Carol's contest : )
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Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2011 at 12:26 PM
I really like this one and am happy I found it on your back pages. So tender and sweet . Merry Christmas, Jack.
Wesley Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 10:33 AM
Such a lovely verse for your dear Gram and you do have wonderful memories I'm sure.
Ball Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 7:25 PM
What a touching piece this is. So well written. A fine entry for the contest. A winner for sure. God Bless, JB
Fraser Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 2:21 PM
From your words Jack, it's so easy to see that she was a lovely lady. Thank you for the kind comments on Lorena's poem :)
Ross Jr. Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:30 PM
Moving and terrific write....God bless...old Jack
Devonshire Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 4:03 PM
Write to Carol and she'll reopen the contest, Jack! (Lots of folks do this.) This one is too sweet not to be in the winners' circle. Very tender thoughts on your grandmother! Love, Carolyn
Cooke Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 3:30 PM
lovely poem, emotion sentiment, proper poetry i like a lot
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