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Her Torn Heart

The dark clouds hid her heart from view No one could see it so no one knew. That this heart of hers had laid dormant For a very long time. Afraid to come out of its shell Cause it knew pain very well. It had been hurt so many times before That it decided to close its doors. It had gotten to a state That like a bear it would hibernate. She had a sign outside her door Love doesn’t live here any more. Love from this place has moved away In here it could not stay. In this house there is too much gloom How is love supposed to bloom? There in the corner sits her broken heart Numerous times it had been torn apart. So she lives in misery, wondering When her heart will be free. Then a light shown from under the door From a heart who had been here before. They say that “ misery loves company” But they found love and are now free. ( I’m an optimist)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/21/2011 6:57:00 AM
It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us Louis. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/7/2011 8:43:00 PM
Very nice poem. love the story. Happy ending too. Love it
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Date: 7/6/2011 6:58:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here this morning in my Soupland. Words pouring onto paper from poets souls. What a joy to be able to sit and read such wonderful poetry for awhile today. Have a very good day Louis. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 8:42:00 PM
Lovely.....
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Date: 7/5/2011 7:54:00 PM
I love this..
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