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Her Threads So Moist

"""""""""""``````""""""""""" long-stemmed river glides soaking on threads of nectar... blue moon combs her hair """"""""""""""""""""""" (( P D's Any Haiku Will Do Contest by nette onclaud))

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2011 2:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Any Haiku Will Do" Nette. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/18/2011 11:12:00 AM

great last line and pretty picture. congratulations on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2011 9:30:00 AM

CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON WONDERFUL WINNING HAIKU OF GRAND WORDS SWEETIE..OH SO BEHIND WITH THIS MOVING STUFF..LUV..

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/18/2011 7:22:00 AM

Deeply penned my friend, loved and enjoyed it. Congratulation for win. bl

David Williams

Date: 9/18/2011 6:19:00 AM

Nette congrats on your win..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2011 3:53:00 AM

Nette, A wonderful congratulations on your Haiku awesome win, ;-). Thank you so much for entering and sharing your poem.Thanks for supporting my contest,, God bless,... LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2011 6:27:00 AM

Congratulations Nette, on your well deserved win for your poem in Charles Henderson's contest "String Haiku". Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/16/2011 6:01:00 AM

lovely tropical string! Congrad's Light & Love

Sidney Beck

Date: 2/16/2011 3:30:00 AM

beautiful music I hear as I recite this haiku....I am no expert on Japanese forms and never enter these contests....but I always admire your word-tunes Nette.....congratulations ...sincerely Syd

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/15/2011 4:00:00 PM

A nice descriptive set of haiku poems here. Congratulations on your win in C. Henderson's contest.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/15/2011 12:13:00 PM

An incredible set of images that brings the water to life with the comb stroking it. Well done, Nette! Congratulations on your win in the string contest! Love, Carolyn

Eiken Laan

Date: 2/15/2011 8:44:00 AM

Nette, Wonderful string haiku, well done:))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2011 10:36:00 PM

Beautiful as always, a big congratulations to you, Nette!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2011 7:43:00 PM

Way to go Nette my friend on another super win in the string Haiku contest with this brilliant beauty luv.. enjoy...

John Freeman

Date: 2/14/2011 7:22:00 PM

Congratulations Nette on your poem's honored win. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/14/2011 6:07:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, nette

Kash Poet

Date: 2/14/2011 6:04:00 PM

I missed this gem from you before,nette!Congratulations on yet another win ---Kashinath

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/14/2011 4:36:00 PM

Great work. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Charles Henderson

Date: 2/10/2011 1:13:00 AM

again, Charles

Charles Henderson

Date: 2/10/2011 12:19:00 AM

soup mail waiting

Daver Austin

Date: 2/3/2011 7:19:00 AM

WOW! My pacemaker was racing wildly after this one. Easy though, I have recovered. Love these multiple haiku stories. Love, Dave

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/2/2011 5:29:00 PM

a lovely entry for the contest this is Nette, enjoyed your haiku,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2011 11:47:00 PM

Hey, you did a twilight eve too, but yours is sexy and mine isn't. hahaha. Is this the one you told me about. Yes, Nette, it lives up to what you said. Very sensual! I just bet Charles loves it. LUv, Andrea

David Byrne

Date: 2/1/2011 11:33:00 PM

I am getting the idea : )

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/1/2011 10:06:00 PM

awesome, best of luck in the contest