Nette Onclaud Poet Haiku

Her Threads So Moist

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long-stemmed river glides
                     soaking on threads of nectar...
                            blue moon combs her hair




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(( P D's Any  Haiku Will Do Contest
by nette onclaud))

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2011 at 2:52 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Any Haiku Will Do" Nette. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan September 18, 2011 at 11:12 AM great last line and pretty picture. congratulations on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 18, 2011 at 9:30 AM CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON WONDERFUL WINNING HAIKU OF GRAND WORDS SWEETIE..OH SO BEHIND WITH THIS MOVING STUFF..LUV..

Bl Devnath September 18, 2011 at 7:22 AM Deeply penned my friend, loved and enjoyed it. Congratulation for win. bl

David Williams September 18, 2011 at 6:19 AM Nette congrats on your win..David

Poet Destroyer A September 18, 2011 at 3:53 AM Nette, A wonderful congratulations on your Haiku awesome win, ;-). Thank you so much for entering and sharing your poem.Thanks for supporting my contest,, God bless,... LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 6:27 AM Congratulations Nette, on your well deserved win for your poem in Charles Henderson's contest "String Haiku". Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi February 16, 2011 at 6:01 AM lovely tropical string! Congrad's Light & Love

Sidney Beck February 16, 2011 at 3:30 AM beautiful music I hear as I recite this haiku....I am no expert on Japanese forms and never enter these contests....but I always admire your word-tunes Nette.....congratulations ...sincerely Syd

Robert Pettit February 15, 2011 at 4:00 PM A nice descriptive set of haiku poems here. Congratulations on your win in C. Henderson's contest.

Carolyn Devonshire February 15, 2011 at 12:13 PM An incredible set of images that brings the water to life with the comb stroking it. Well done, Nette! Congratulations on your win in the string contest! Love, Carolyn

Eiken Laan February 15, 2011 at 8:44 AM Nette, Wonderful string haiku, well done:))

Andrea Dietrich February 14, 2011 at 10:36 PM Beautiful as always, a big congratulations to you, Nette!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 14, 2011 at 7:43 PM Way to go Nette my friend on another super win in the string Haiku contest with this brilliant beauty luv.. enjoy...

John Freeman February 14, 2011 at 7:22 PM Congratulations Nette on your poem's honored win. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta February 14, 2011 at 6:07 PM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, nette

Kash Poet February 14, 2011 at 6:04 PM I missed this gem from you before,nette!Congratulations on yet another win ---Kashinath

Joyce Johnson February 14, 2011 at 4:36 PM Great work. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Charles Henderson February 10, 2011 at 1:13 AM again, Charles

Charles Henderson February 10, 2011 at 12:19 AM soup mail waiting

Daver Austin February 3, 2011 at 7:19 AM WOW! My pacemaker was racing wildly after this one. Easy though, I have recovered. Love these multiple haiku stories. Love, Dave

Poet Destroyer A February 2, 2011 at 5:29 PM a lovely entry for the contest this is Nette, enjoyed your haiku,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2011 at 11:47 PM Hey, you did a twilight eve too, but yours is sexy and mine isn't. hahaha. Is this the one you told me about. Yes, Nette, it lives up to what you said. Very sensual! I just bet Charles loves it. LUv, Andrea

David Byrne February 1, 2011 at 11:33 PM I am getting the idea : )

Francine Roberts February 1, 2011 at 10:06 PM awesome, best of luck in the contest