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Spring made this teen, just drool, drool. Dreaming of the Varsity hero, like a silly fool. To die, in his ripped, tanned, strong arms. To be his love, she sighed, a blessed charm! 3/13/2024

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Date: 3/17/2024 11:21:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Sorry, I missed your "Birthday." Hope you had a great day with some cake/ice cream... Have a wonderful day..................
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/17/2024 3:05:00 PM
Yes, yes we had great cakes and no need to apologize! I feel a year younger, full of peace and free of living my life to please the world in any shape, matter or form. I have spent most of my life fighting off being a sheep. But now…. I graduated from decades of doing this dance. It is so awesome! Pangie xx
Date: 3/15/2024 6:40:00 AM
I remember liking only one boy. He was not varsity. He was smart, mature, handsome. We were in honors classes together and I believe he had no idea that I existed. LOL Loved this simple, yet sweet love poem. Yes, I know who. ;) hugs :)
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Date: 3/15/2024 1:24:00 PM
Linda, honors is great! I think girl like us just think thedid not see us? ( Maybe thet did) Eddie is on the honor roll, too! I dont know how he can practice after school with exercises, then play a game. He comes home to eat and study. Watching Roku..)) just sent you his latest photo. Pangie xx
Date: 3/14/2024 8:46:00 AM
sounds like me in my school days. I really like this, Pangie, and I want to say belated birthday greetings to you!
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Date: 3/14/2024 12:55:00 PM
Thank you, friend, Andrea for the birthday greetings and comment as well. This is a very simple and earthy poem. Nothing esoteric nor existential. Hardly jumping with phenomenal imagery or import! It never was meant to be. I am delighted you liked it and could relate it to your own feelings, that was the point! Hurrah! I definitely am a poet of the heart! Hugs, Pangie x
Date: 3/14/2024 3:42:00 AM
The high school years go by so quickly. This is a lovely tribute to them, dear Pangie. xoxx
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Date: 3/14/2024 7:01:00 AM
Glad I came back, my response was missing. I remember those days, boys think of girls, too. It was a great time! I found that image, forgit I had it. Was perfect for that poem …besides i have a similer setting where I live, pangie thank you
Date: 3/13/2024 9:06:00 PM
This is a lovely monorhyme. High School was an exciting time of life. This was a nice look back.
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Date: 3/13/2024 10:49:00 PM
I am so happy you like this, Hild!a. It was a refreshing expereience to recall,those okd crushes we haf! Made me feel a lot, which is a good thing. Take care Hilda.? Pangie
Date: 3/13/2024 7:12:00 PM
Oh for the dreams of our teens, when spring arrived and stars were in our eyes. Lovely Pangie, enjoy your birthday… Belle
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Date: 3/13/2024 7:24:00 PM
Hello fellow, co-author and poetess. I was just telling Paige down below about our poem and I forgot the title and I didn’t want to go back and look for it. I gave her your wrong last name oh God.. I think she would really like that. If you could comment below her comment and tell her the titles to look for urine is fine I don’t care when both sites take it to yours. You know I forgot we have written at Pullman. It’s only what two weeks ago and after I wrote this, I thought of you and doing poem with you was the best best experience of the whole year. And now the day is over and I can look forward to next year and the many years after that I hope, Wishing you the best and grateful for your visit, Pangie x
Date: 3/13/2024 5:38:00 PM
ah, spring, and love is in the air...saw this all the time when spring arrived. My high schoolers became enamored with love itself. Nicely done & hope you had a splendid birthday, hugs, Sara
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Date: 3/13/2024 7:17:00 PM
Sara, many thanks, Tes I did, Much came from the Soupers themselves, you are a good example.. you are not selfish you share yourself as much as you can I know that. .. Oh I taught elementary school, so it wasn’t that bad .This was me in the piem. But its all apart of growing up. Would I like to be young again no… life has too many trials to go through, and I had enough to last hundred or more. Elena turned pale. When I said I would live to 110, Poor kud. my life has been anything but a smooth ride. Try a roller coaster a really rough roller coaster. But I believe I’m in Gance and that’s all I need to know.. he made made me and he’ll take me home when He is ready. Pangie
Date: 3/13/2024 5:18:00 PM
Very beautiful. I could see you as a teen. :)
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Date: 3/13/2024 7:56:00 PM
Paige the collaboration poem I did with Pangie was titled ‘A Teen Earth Angel’ ~ Beryl
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Date: 3/13/2024 7:08:00 PM
You can?? That’s great. I still remember lying in my four poster bed and thinking about a guy who didn’t even know I existed.. usually a varsity guy! Yes I thought of myself when I wrote this it was many years ago., but it’s nice to be where I am today. Time only marches forward Paige you know that none of us can go home again. We are all grown up.. I recently wrote a with Beryl Edwards it was so good. We got some rave reviews in the United Kingdom especially Beryl. If you haven’t met her, you should read her please! She is quite an awesome person. We never know who we leave feeling empty in comments. we’re in a big hurry , and when we do that, we miss getting to know the other person. we just like stamp a plus or minus and we run on our way. I won’t do that. And when I do …I leave feeling empty and cold but I cheated myself and the other person out of any human interaction. Like waving at someone from a train, but having zero human contact!

Book: Shattered Sighs