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Her Tatoo

The mole that she is sporting there On the breast that's partially bare Proud to have the beauty mark She got it one day on a lark The needle stung but worth the price Sure the boys would think it nice The spot upon her chest you see Natural beauty for a monetary fee For the Mole contest...

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Cas Davis

Date: 9/19/2010 1:41:00 PM

Very cleverly written. 7

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 8/10/2010 9:08:00 AM

wow. interesting turn at the end. enjoyed this. then again i am a guy, i enjoy anything with a breast attached to it.lol. great write.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2010 11:43:00 AM

I was gone and did not read any poetry the past weekend. So I am trying to get some read today. I am pleased that yours is among what I have read today and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Barbara. The best to you in the contest as always. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/9/2010 5:29:00 AM

funny to think someone would put a mole on themselves for beauty...guess it takes all kinds.

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/8/2010 10:55:00 PM

good luck in the contest with this cute one