Her Sustenance

Her lust for you is fierce.
She spreads it out before you
as if it were a lavish bridegroom’s dinner
of caviar, oysters and shrimp;
spears of warmed asparagus and
artichokes stripped of leaves to dip in luscious butter;
truffles too with fragrant muskiness;
all foods of succulence -  inciting appetite.

Her tender lips are moist - champagne to further whet desire.
Entreating you to take your fill, she whispers in your ear,
“Partake of me, my love. Take more and more.”

As you imbibe her and consume her,
your feeding frenzy peaks
 when she offers from her fingers- sweetest fruit:
honeyed figs with cream, peaches, plums, and kumquats;
and one red well-ripened berry.

Utterly sated,
drunk from delectation;
motionless, you lie upon your bed.
And when your eyes move rapidly
beneath their heavy lids,
she slides her body carefully off yours,
slips back into her gossamer gown, 
hastens on tiptoes to the door; turn the knob;
and without looking back,
steps into the blackness of the night.

You'll waken and want to feast again
but find that she has parted.
(to banquets such as hers, 
one rarely is invited more than once).
And so you'll live and love,
knowing that you can never resume -
a coupling so completely gratifying.
Your passion was consumed in
your consuming of this goddess
who takes from men again. . .  and again

But the nourishment that she requires
must always be fresh,
and that is what 
eternally
sustains her.

A Revised Oldie for the Heart of Seduction Poetry Contest of Justin Bordner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bordner Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Fresh passion an obsession, new love a nightly affliction, a dillema of Goddess delight! This poem is so very sumptious, so very pleasing Andrea, and another FAV. J.A.B.
Sirak Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 8:44 AM
Okay sometimes my mind wanders down strange lanes. While reading this I kept thinking of the Eagles song, Hotel California.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 8:33 PM
This is hot Andrea! Congratulations.
Parker Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 6:54 PM
Sorry I missed this when it was posted, congratulaions to you now, I really like the approach you took
Allison Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 12:49 PM
dropping back with my congrats on your Hm Andrea:-) hugs jan xxx
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 12:37 PM
- A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations, Andrea ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 11:43 AM
because you hypnotize me, andie... a glory spot in my opinion.. big cheers on your fine win!
Yvonne Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 10:48 AM
Right back to fav this treasure.
Yvonne Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations Andrea, I know it worked on me.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write dear Andrea!
May Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 7:41 AM
I love how you combined food with passion......Congrats on a great win
Horne Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 3:26 PM
haven't read this one before but I love this sensual write, my friend - a sure winner here
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 9:12 PM
hahhaha love it Andie..! passionate write!
Horsman Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 4:31 PM
I thought the title was familiar, again a wonderful poem that shows off your superb poetic talent
Mcdaid Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 11:53 AM
very passionate write andrea
Goff Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 7:27 AM
man......should be a chapter in Vatsyayna's "kama sutra" ....best read side-by-side with Sun Tzu's "art of war" as they compliment each other's intensity.....every man's goal....jimbo
Bolton Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 7:03 PM
Aww . . . This is fantastic! To the nth. Your wordplay was very titillating to say the least. I was getting off as you described the banquet the goddess offered him, especially as she offered him "from her fingers- sweetest fruit: honeyed figs with cream, peaches, plums, and kumquats; and one red well-ripened berry" Wow! 'Nuff said . . .
A   Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Andrea, you should know my age by now... LOL, it's not what I thought. Maybe aging ain't so bad. hahahah. Anyways, this poem's amazing. I hope Justin Loves it. I'd be afraid to enter his contest. Love Linda
Anish Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 6:15 PM
Sweet, sensual words! Nice job of portraying intimate moments! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Yvonne Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 5:10 PM
I didn't know you could say kumquats on this site without being censored. The rest of it was rather mild...mild in comparison to...I don't know maybe fifty shades of gray...very seductive Andrea, the kind of work I usually take into the rest room with me...
Bateman Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 4:53 PM
Andrea, A marvelous write in every respect!! Its seduction and beauty go hand-in-hand. Best of Luck with the contest. Best Wishes, Gary
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 4:44 PM
Wow, what salacious pleasures you describe Andrea!
Kiser Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 1:08 PM
Fabulous! Good luck with the contest.
A  Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 12:52 PM
This sure sounds like a winning poem. Love it Lady, Enjoy your day, Love ~SKAT~
Walker Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 12:46 PM
Whoa, you have such a knack for seducing the man in the poem but also the reader. I had to read to the end your words drew me in. Loved it.
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