Her Sun Won'T Go Down

The most random thoughts can pop in your head -
like, after it’s down, does the sun go to bed?

This must be a problem when birthing new stars.
Can’t sing ‘em to sleep; they ignite the guitars.

Their mom must be frazzled, not getting much sleep,
so I thought for a moment, and I thought pretty deep.

I’ve got a new venture that seems pretty sweet;
to get suns to bed, you need fireproof sheets.
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Krutsinger Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 11:03 AM
Loving these end rhymes Jeff
Fowler Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 7:29 AM
LOL Jeff. So creative and inventive...fireproof sheets indeed :))
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