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Her Souvenirs

She had another birthday And she sat before the mirror She contemplated her gray hair Her wrinkles and her years But she didn't need to fret She shouldn't really fear Cause her gray hairs are memories Her wrinkles are souvenirs Each strand of silver shows a worry That never came to pass Each deep line upon her face Is there because she laughed There have been times of trouble And there have been times of stress But life has really been quite good For she's been truly blest And so it's Happy Birthday She is so very dear For her gray hairs are memories And her wrinkles are souvenirs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/11/2010 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Steven. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2010 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, I love the idea that grey hairs are memories.
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Steven. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/17/2010 12:49:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all this happy Sunday with luv..
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Date: 3/18/2010 5:01:00 AM
Steven, Another great write...this shows some of your character...Apreciation of the precious beings made by God..The Queen of Enland was quoted as saying why should I do anything about my wrinkles for I earned everyone of them...The form that you chose to present the idea is well done..Keep the creative pen flowing. I am going to add you to my favorite poet's list..Sara
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Date: 3/14/2010 9:16:00 AM
Very well written, I can picture the person exactly. For whom was this written, if anyone?
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Date: 3/14/2010 12:22:00 AM
Loved it! Last two lines are excellent.
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Date: 3/13/2010 5:24:00 PM
Very nice tribute!! silver polished over time to shine like halos on the wise and aged.
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