Her Souvenirs

She had another birthday
And she sat before the mirror
She contemplated her gray hair
Her wrinkles and her years

But she didn't need to fret
She shouldn't really fear
Cause her gray hairs are memories
Her wrinkles are souvenirs

Each strand of silver shows a worry
That never came to pass
Each deep line upon her face
Is there because she laughed

There have been times of trouble
And there have been times of stress
But life has really been quite good
For she's been truly blest

And so it's Happy Birthday
She is so very dear
For her gray hairs are memories
And her wrinkles are souvenirs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Steven. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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October 20, 2010 at 4:23 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, I love the idea that grey hairs are memories.
Brown Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:30 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Steven. Love, Carol
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October 17, 2010 at 12:49 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all this happy Sunday with luv..
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March 18, 2010 at 5:01 AM
Steven, Another great write...this shows some of your character...Apreciation of the precious beings made by God..The Queen of Enland was quoted as saying why should I do anything about my wrinkles for I earned everyone of them...The form that you chose to present the idea is well done..Keep the creative pen flowing. I am going to add you to my favorite poet's list..Sara
Green Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 9:16 AM
Very well written, I can picture the person exactly. For whom was this written, if anyone?
Palli Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 12:22 AM
Loved it! Last two lines are excellent.
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March 13, 2010 at 5:24 PM
Very nice tribute!! silver polished over time to shine like halos on the wise and aged.
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