Her Song

"her song" sitting on golden sands I'm in my glory mesmerized as the waters tell me a story with eyes opened wide peace is by my side held within this world of tides I have wings looking to the beyond and the life it brings be it sunrise or sunset all senses are met seeing seagulls fly and watching dolphins dive total completeness of mind body soul arrive showcasing what they know sharing a rare show with grand reflections and whispering secrets one will not find this in traveling pamphlets as I utter so long the ocean whistles her song SkyWatcher 06-13-23

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/22/2023 2:50:00 PM

No, you don't find this in phamplets, my friend. Lovely imagery and a smooth flow to your thoughts. A very peaceful poem for a afternoon read. Thanks for sharing your poems with us, Lisa. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/23/2023 2:27:00 AM

It is I who thanks you. Good Morning Bill. Hi. Thank you once again. Its so true that one will not know the ocean and her glory by looking at a pamphlet. She must be seen in person. Have a wonderful morning and weekend too. I will see you on your page very soon. Blessings always (smile)

Michael Tor

Date: 6/14/2023 11:48:00 PM

Lovely Poem Lisa you are a wonderful writer. God continue blessing you...

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/15/2023 3:21:00 AM

Hello Michael. Good Morning. Thank you ever so much. I am completely honored because I consider you to be a wonderful writer as well. Truly. I'm sorry I don't turn to your as as often as I would like. Time and energy limit my reading and reviewing so I come and go but still post when I can so I don't get rusty or stale. Words do not express my appreciation for your review and commentary to which I do not take for granted. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings back to you personally and poetically. (smile)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/14/2023 1:27:00 AM

Wonderful poem. Alas I am not allowed to go to the beach with this pain.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/14/2023 2:20:00 AM

Good Morning Victor. Hi. I am so sorry that your health is what is is that leaves you in a fragile way. Know you are adored and you are in my thoughts and prayers. Thank you Victor for taking the time to visit my page and entry. Truly. Please take care of yourself. May today show you and bring you everything good. Love and Blessings now and always (smile with prayers)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2023 12:51:00 PM

So poetic this is. You have the poet's beautiful heart. Also thanks for the sweet comments you leave for me and others on Soup

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/14/2023 2:12:00 AM

Good Morning Andrea. Hi. Thank you ever so much. I am beyond honored by your commentary. Truly. Thank you. Have a wonderful morning and day, Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup. (smile) Blessings...