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Her Smile

her head rests softly on my chest with such grace with warmth from her smile © Joseph S. Spence, Sr., (Epulaeryu Master) 8/27/08 All Rights Reserved, Milwaukee, Wisconsin, USA Senior Advisor, to Founder of Motivational Strips Ambassador De Literature Noble Star of Literature 2018 Living Legend of the 21st Century Pentasiv B World Friendship Poetry Featured Poet 2019

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Tk Ross

Date: 6/20/2010 11:34:00 AM

'sigh'---this is really lovely:) I am enjoying reading some of your wonderful poems, and thank you for you kind words on mine as well.-TK

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/19/2010 12:26:00 AM

So very sweet and romantic Joseph!Celene!

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/15/2010 3:11:00 PM

Hi Joseph, just looking through some of your writes. I love this senryu, so full of tenderness. Really made me smile ~ Sharon :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2010 2:03:00 PM

A lovely image, her smiles you painted as if it was art, enjoyed,..p.d.

Jayne Eggins

Date: 9/6/2009 5:38:00 AM

So tender and poignant joesph a true gem of a poem just beautiful ... kind regards Jayne and thank you for your wonderful comments on my poems ,

Alley Poe

Date: 5/16/2009 5:54:00 PM

oh man i nearly cried here!!!! beautiful absolutely heart warming... -Alley

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/13/2009 9:23:00 PM

Lovely Joseph.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/23/2008 7:39:00 AM

Joseph, thanks for commenting on my Haiku.. this is lovely and Ill try to read all your work. Its a lot harder than I thought it woud be. BG.

Lena W

Date: 10/14/2008 6:08:00 PM

Sweet! Lena

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/11/2008 6:32:00 PM

Gentle, warm and loving...much like you I am learning. Thank you always for your wonderful comments. Always enlightening. ~Trudy~

Autumn Rose Wood

Date: 10/7/2008 1:10:00 PM

Short and sweet. I like!

Michelle Norvell

Date: 10/2/2008 10:28:00 PM

touching poem nice work and thanks for your comments on my work

James Foulk

Date: 9/23/2008 1:20:00 PM

a very warm and touching piece. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comments.

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/30/2008 4:48:00 PM

A gentle and serene image, well written. Regards Heidie

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/29/2008 3:23:00 AM

What a lovely image to behold..simpley beautiful. love Kristin

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 8/28/2008 7:17:00 AM

Beautiful, Joseph. A moment in time that adds endless moments to our lives. The 'grace',the 'warmth' and that 'smile' that leaves an imprint on your soul. So nice, Joseph. :) Wishing the best to you! God bless you and yours..love to you, Mikki

Adell Foster

Date: 8/28/2008 4:51:00 AM

Welcome back Joseph, this is a very precious read, such a marvelous imagery of tenderness and love reaches the heart of the reader, how could one not keep from smiling. Excellent form my friend, thank you for sharing such a beautiful read :-) God's Love and Many Blessings to you both, Always, Adell

Brian Strand

Date: 8/27/2008 11:56:00 PM

Liked this very much Joseph.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/27/2008 10:02:00 PM

Joseph - Hi, it sure is good to see you Joseph - I hope all is well with you and your family - As always your poem is perfect and just a pure joy to read - God Bless you my friend