Her Silent Seams

her words,

 now naked.

Finally 

letting them       e
                     e       v
                      v     o
                          l 

and run into
                 silent seams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Hello Kabuteng P. Ink K., so nice to meet you.I like this poem that you have created. Have a nice day my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 9:23 PM
I clicked on your best poem. Did you know this was it? it really is awesome, Nikko!!! You must have gotten at least one or more fave on it. Is that how it works, do you think?
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 9:23 PM
Also, thanks so much, sweetie, for the birthday message.
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 10:14 AM
"MY TEARS FILL UP SEAS" -----YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A line better than DMT~~~~well, almost:)
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 10:10 AM
serious/nice delivery on this type of Hexadoodle whopper poem.Never mind me, I'm listening to Terance McKenna ramble on about Cart Jung & read poems at the same time. Not a good mixture. Now all I need is some Psilocybin Mushroom Tea. On comments, I dig the way you let it all out. NEVER a short boring response! Keep on keepin on, ON don't leave this site yet. I've got a few things cookin' to improve our poet lives. I will give you the scoop very soon. It is gonna take some effort by us all tho'.
Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 5:29 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
Susan Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 9:43 AM
soupmail - p.s. reveled eclipses or revealed?
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 10:42 PM
Hi, Sweet Nikko. Glad you won. I see this is getting congratulations so CONGRATS, my friend.
Loving Iii Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 7:45 PM
i love stories that tell of redemtion and this is a redemtion story.
Susan Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 9:30 AM
congratulations on your win! love the last line :) p.s. do people, besides soup people, comment on your work on pft?
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 9:36 PM
Congrats on your win, Nikko! This is an amazing write. I think it should have placed much higher. Just my opinion. A fave for me. Blessings, Rhonda
Chircop Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 12:44 AM
One for my favourites..So very beautiful Nikko,sweet friend-Charma
Brown Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 5:18 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Nikko. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 6:10 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 4:38 PM
congrats sweet friend Nikko on an exciting win for this exceptional write so electrifying my friend.. awesome as always luv..
Falotico Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 8:13 PM
Nikko the Sweet you are a poet of the ages this is a masterpiece. A perfect example of a form I wish to learn. Bravo hun bravo. Luv and applause n hugs to you. Michael
Wesley Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 1:43 PM
So many lovely thoughts enhance your lovely verse Nikko, Wish you all the best in the contest!
Guzzi Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 12:03 PM
opening it for you my little cutie! L & L
Agtani Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 12:18 AM
Very lovely Hexaverse my dear Nikko. I feel like I'm reading a riddle and I'm tring to guess for the right answer! Hmmm, don't make me think Nikko! A winning piece! I have not been following any contest lately. Busy kasi. I am expecting a dear friend to come visit me in Seattle. Love Dalila
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 10:06 PM
Nikko, you did Superbly with this entry. MY, and you told me you just didn't know. Well, it's awesome. What less would I expect of you!!! I posted my silly one. Wish I knew how to do outstanding free verse!!!
Devonshire Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 2:25 PM
How sweet of your man to offer to kiss you every night so you know how much you are loved. Like the way you made "dust" from the mask. Very cool, Nikko. Wishing you success in Catie's contest. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 10:02 AM
ah a sweet and tender expression filled with compassion and empathy for another Nikko luv.. wishing u much success in Catie's contest.. and also good luck with your great new challenge to all poets here... gladly obliged luv.. sweet day as sweet as u ..puppy kisses and hugs..
Grisetti Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 8:20 AM
Such a beautiful poem, I can feel that smile breaking.
Rhinem Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 5:30 AM
Smile ˜ Sooo Precious The Sweeetness Of It All * Dear Beautiful Nikko ˜ Love Always, John!:) ˜
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March 28, 2012 at 4:32 PM
Dear Nikko :) what a lovely write! so enjoyed reading this today just beautiful. I hope this does very well in Catie's contest. Thank you very much for your sweet comments. P.S I'm favin this one! Love Alexa
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