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Her Silence Beckons

'''''''''''''""""~~~""""""""""""""" as daylight flows on floors of meadows’ weave like tiny fingers silent in silk of sailing traces this landscape travels on her fragile, hushed heave and when full morn speaks in syllables of pink laces, i climb her flights of smiles to touch those tender graces just a glance of champagne cheeks through her secret seat makes hours sink in seconds breathing psalms of time’s aces then i’d go deep for a pageant of your tulips upon my feet as i hide snuffed sighs claiming eyes that await my reply of a love as pure dawn giving wings to flowers’ poised paces, the treasures in my chest are not tiaras or diamonds sold high this, my rimless devotion will plant years gold with praises your comfort in blaze of thunder, i’ll gladly give raw braces a lifetime of caress to guide our lanes pastoral and wild we’d greet, savoring flute, butterflies and giggling shells on winds’ embraces then i’d swoon for a pageant of your tulips upon my feet have i grown weeds in yarns of time, answer not yet said? a flick of hope blows on this my airborne soul for returned praises oh, my waters entice me as potpourri of my lady’s rhymes are fed, when she stalls, then crawls on wanderings of night’s mazes her quiet flush textured with pleas of patience on moon’s faces, this silence has many altars adorned by veils of her sun and sleet still, i stay with serenades to dust her feathers too shy for chases then i’d swoon for a pageant of your tulips upon my feet the absence of her eloquence jail me in chapels’ clumped vases till she, lady of my velvet dreams, lit my passion’s fond heat our hands shall wander unto rhapsody of faraway places then i’d swoon for a pageant of your tulips upon my feet! """"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/24/2011 3:11:00 PM
love your words. beautiful -Nicole
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Date: 3/13/2011 2:05:00 PM
Nette this is so so good and the meter is great too, yet, it was SO much harder to absorb because you don't use Capitalization and periods. The eye needs to stop in verses of this form, to know where to pause and linger, in content for me this was number one so far but you make me dizzy!!!! and yes I know the man was dizzy with love YIKERS!!! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/10/2011 5:57:00 PM
A difficult contest, but your entry was outstanding. Congratulations on winning in the contest.
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Date: 3/10/2011 4:28:00 PM
A wonderful write. Congratulations on your fifth place win with this lovely Ballade. Caryl
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Date: 3/10/2011 2:19:00 PM
This is so poetic, reminding me of classic rhyme. Just love your swooning line about the "pageant of tulips upon my feet"! Congratulations,Nette. Way to go.
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Date: 3/10/2011 1:29:00 PM
beautifully refrained ballade, nette, Congrats on your fifth place win,
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:19:00 AM
Amazing simply amazing dear Nette. I so enjoyed this. Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:46:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and a deep sense of longing, Nette. Congratulations on your big win, my friend. So happy for you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:30:00 AM
Sensational Ballade, dear Nette. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/10/2011 7:14:00 AM
Congrats Nette dear friend on your big win in Catie's contest with this awesome Ballade luv.. enjoy another top ten win..
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Date: 2/24/2011 8:58:00 AM
Well Nette I want to be in this place.. it sound super fantastic ..peaceful .. full of beauty and elegance.. good luck in the contest.. u did a marvelous Ballade my friend.. this one will entice Catie...
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Date: 2/23/2011 4:50:00 PM
You do have a way with words, that leave the reader in awe! beyond the usual, for sure! This should hit a high mark!
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Date: 2/23/2011 12:31:00 PM
A classical poetic write reminding me of the ancient time, nette. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/23/2011 12:00:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work that is very descriptive and expressive..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by and commenting with such kind remarks on my work..Sara
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Date: 2/23/2011 11:33:00 AM
Hey nette(celestial) onclaud! another amazing write from you.A great entry into the contest!!-kashinath
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