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Her Show

She doesn't dance like Anna Pavlova She doesn't sing like Diana Ross but on this blissful day I am watching the best performer I've ever come across She wobbled on her pique turns She forgot to point her toes but she never lost her smile a perfect angel until the close She might not sing in perfect rhythm She might not always be in tune but her singing is so beautiful it makes this proud daddy swoon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/7/2014 3:23:00 PM
Adorably sweet..A treasure indeed!
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Date: 12/7/2014 5:25:00 AM
I can relate, I miss when my daughters were younger and I went to see them in performances.
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Date: 12/6/2014 11:37:00 AM
Oh! super.................................
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Date: 12/6/2014 2:04:00 AM
Golden moments to be treasured Tim! My son also sings rap! God bless ! Beautiful write n wonderful expressions!
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Date: 12/6/2014 12:55:00 AM
So very sweet, Tim! My son just played a turkey in a school play. Those moments are to be cherished! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/5/2014 10:23:00 PM
:) :) :) How beautifully worded. A swooning daddy is a joy to see.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/5/2014 10:55:00 PM
Thank you Eileen.....she'll be 5 in February and already has me wrapped around her finger...Her 15 yr old sister taught her well....hugs Tim
Date: 12/5/2014 5:58:00 PM
OMG Tim. I love this. It is so adorable. 7+fav.
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Date: 12/5/2014 10:52:00 PM
Thank you Brenda....I'm treated to two events this weekend.. My older daughter has her first gymnastics meet of the year on Sunday... Hugs Tim
Date: 12/5/2014 5:45:00 PM
That was such a sweet poem. But the second stanza, third line, may have an extra her or needs a different word. I loved the poem.
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Date: 12/5/2014 10:50:00 PM
Thanks Alesia...yes there was an extra her...hugs Tim
Date: 12/5/2014 4:41:00 PM
aww cute:-) Hugs jan x
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Date: 12/5/2014 4:43:00 PM
Thanks Jan...my youngest has her show tomorrow :) ...hugs Tim

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