Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Her Show

She doesn't dance like Anna Pavlova
She doesn't sing like Diana Ross
but on this blissful day I am watching
the best performer I've ever come across

She wobbled on her pique turns
She forgot to point her toes
but she never lost her smile
a perfect angel until the close

She might not sing in perfect rhythm
She might not always be in tune
but her singing is so beautiful
it makes this proud daddy swoon

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Charmaine Chircop December 7, 2014 at 3:23 PM Adorably sweet..A treasure indeed!

Maurice Yvonne December 7, 2014 at 5:25 AM I can relate, I miss when my daughters were younger and I went to see them in performances.

Sandip Goswami December 6, 2014 at 11:37 AM Oh! super.................................

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 6, 2014 at 2:04 AM Golden moments to be treasured Tim! My son also sings rap! God bless ! Beautiful write n wonderful expressions!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 6, 2014 at 12:55 AM So very sweet, Tim! My son just played a turkey in a school play. Those moments are to be cherished! Hugs, Rhonda

Eileen Manassian December 5, 2014 at 10:23 PM :) :) :) How beautifully worded. A swooning daddy is a joy to see. Tim Smith December 5, 2014 at 10:55 PM Thank you Eileen.....she'll be 5 in February and already has me wrapped around her finger...Her 15 yr old sister taught her well....hugs Tim

Brenda Meier-Hans December 5, 2014 at 5:58 PM OMG Tim. I love this. It is so adorable. 7+fav. Tim Smith December 5, 2014 at 10:52 PM Thank you Brenda....I'm treated to two events this weekend.. My older daughter has her first gymnastics meet of the year on Sunday... Hugs Tim

Alesia Leach December 5, 2014 at 5:45 PM That was such a sweet poem. But the second stanza, third line, may have an extra her or needs a different word. I loved the poem. Tim Smith December 5, 2014 at 10:50 PM Thanks Alesia...yes there was an extra her...hugs Tim

Jan Allison December 5, 2014 at 4:41 PM aww cute:-) Hugs jan x Tim Smith December 5, 2014 at 4:43 PM Thanks Jan...my youngest has her show tomorrow :) ...hugs Tim