Her Secret's Hard To Keep

Her tears stain the pillow 
As she lays down to sleep
Dying from within
Her secret’s hard to keep

Violated by one trusted
Betrayed by those she loves
Left alone to suffer
Only wanting to be loved

His hands as cold as ice
Creeping in the night
Her innocence was stolen
She was too weak to fight

Scared to cry out
Believing she’d be shunned
Closing off her heart
Hiding from everyone

Trapped by her memory
Imprisoned by regret
She will take the blame
But what will he get?

His freedom is untouched
His life is unchanged
She can never tell
She feels so much shame

She’s an innocent child
He is a grown man
She wants to forget
She knows she never can

Her tears stain the pillow 
As she lays down to sleep
Dying from within
Her secret’s hard to keep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/5/2009 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/4/2009 5:24:00 PM
This poem nearly brought a tear to this grown mans eye. Hit to close to home I suppose. I hope you are in a safe place mentally and physically. Scary beautiful write
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Date: 9/1/2009 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Lena, on having your heartfelt poem featured this week. Hurt hopes, but somehow, emotions continue to cry... forever. So sorry if this is true in your life. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 9/1/2009 2:14:00 AM
Lolita, congratulations on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 8/31/2009 5:17:00 PM
Such a sad reality for far to many. You convey your message in a powerful way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 8/31/2009 7:59:00 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great LENA! Adeleke
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Date: 8/31/2009 4:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lena. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/23/2009 3:55:00 PM
A sad write. Somethings are so hard to carry be strong! Nicely written! - darkpoet
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Date: 3/7/2009 9:48:00 AM
Very moving and tragic....I can only imagine what this girl has gone through....amazing write for bringing out feelings in all of us who read this. Thanks for your comment on mine....Cecile
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Date: 3/1/2009 12:13:00 PM
I don't know if this poem is about what i think it's about, but if it is then i know exactly what you mean, I've been though exactly the same thing and he walked away as well. It's good to know some people know what it's like and are able to put it into words, thank you. Ivan.
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Date: 2/28/2009 3:13:00 PM
Such a very profoundly sad and touching write dear~ moving its readers to points of understandings need, for empathy and compassion I do believe!!?~"Hello Precious & Gifted Lena Townsend!!!"~I hope that Your weekend is going beautifully for You dear!!? And, this was an Amazingly well written and expressed write here~that one can only hope and pray, has Never befallen Your own life!!?~"My Love Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!"~Bye Dear Lady!:)
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Date: 2/28/2009 7:24:00 AM
powerful! brought a tear to my eye. touching. It reached my heart. I am eager to read more of your work.
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Date: 2/28/2009 12:37:00 AM
I agree with Chris's comments Lena .A poem that has a powerful voice of the sad reality that all too many have experienced.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/27/2009 5:01:00 AM
While the poem, style, rhyme and flow are perfect the contents are a sad reality. You, as the writer, make the reader truly feel for the subject and inspire anger towards the man that would do such a terrible thing. Disgusting, but a well written piece. Michael
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Date: 2/27/2009 1:00:00 AM
Lolita, the terrible struggles you encountered in your youth make me sad. But perhaps you have insight that can help other victims of abuse. Beautiful poem! Carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2009 4:41:00 PM
So often a true story...you hear this story repeated too, too often. So sad, that betrayal and violation...it makes the reader angry and helpless. ~ Well written, ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/26/2009 4:09:00 PM
This is a powerful write my friend filled with so much pain.. from the opening of the piece one can feel the hurt..pillows stained with tears.. trapped by inoocence..so many strong lines that conveys the hurt so well..my heart goes out to the voice in this piece.
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Date: 2/26/2009 2:58:00 PM
Wow, this hits a nerve to anyone who has been touched, or knows someone who has. You have a gift that makes you FEEL what she is going through, sad, but wonderful write.....Aleera
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