Omneya Kamal Poet Free verse

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Melting Chocolate with cinnamon,
Dropping chili on them,
Some lemon drops,
Mixed with orange juice,
All together,
So hot ,
Intensely smelt,
In a deep pot,
Held with both hands,
Some drops on the lips,
Felt by a confused tongue,
Then flowing inside,
With a bitter sweet pleasure...
That’s what she did
When she found that
She is more complicated
Than she ever thought!

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Dinda Minardi March 22, 2013 at 10:53 AM women are unique, they have mood and passion to sustain; not to mention our conscience and academic intelligence. *sigh* see how complicated we are ;) enjoyed the read so much.

James Fraser November 17, 2012 at 4:29 PM This melting pot is a forget me not. It's like a pot of life, so many are sought. If it's to be so complicated, it needs to be read. In turn the outcome, make sure the words are wholly said. Nice one Omneya, and many thanks for reading my humble words :)

Michael J. Falotico October 27, 2012 at 5:28 PM Excellent piece that shows the levels of a person. Love your take on it. Just popped in to read and glance at that lovely smile. Hugs :•) Michael Omneya Kamal October 28, 2012 at 7:45 AM Hey Micheal, Thanks for stopping by and reading the poem, so glad a talented poet like you enjoys reading my poem... ;) have an amazing week! Omneya

Richard Lamoureux October 27, 2012 at 3:14 PM I now have a taste for your style of Poetry, keep them coming. I have always been partial to a little lemon, very cleansing. good job and thanks for stopping by and reading some of my work. Omneya Kamal October 28, 2012 at 7:39 AM Hey Richard, thanks for stopping by too, So glad you like the poem and share the lemony flavor I added to it ;) Have a good day! Omneya

Joseph May October 26, 2012 at 6:30 PM wonderful write Omneya...enjoyed....thanks for stopping by....love ...Joseph Omneya Kamal October 26, 2012 at 6:40 PM Glad you liked it Joseph! Thanks for stopping by too! enjoy your week end, Omneya

Anne-Lise Andresen October 24, 2012 at 11:08 AM Tastes well ? ? ? it was enjoyable to read it Omneya- a poem that I liked very much - thank you for sharing it with me. Have a nice day. - / / oxox love from Anne-Lise :) Omneya Kamal October 26, 2012 at 6:21 PM Hey Anne, so glad you follow my writings in here! so happy you like this poem, its very close to my heart! have a great week end! <3

Jett Franco October 22, 2012 at 8:23 PM this piece makes me think of a sweet symphony..keep penning dear poetess so that I could taste more sweetness from you.. regards jett Omneya Kamal October 26, 2012 at 6:19 PM Hey Jett, Thanks dear for your comment and for reading the poem! so happy u liked it you seem to be a fan of free verse like me :) so we so much relate!

Vicky Tsiluma October 22, 2012 at 2:44 AM WHoa! Chocolate and chili? WHyyyy? You have highly succeeded in bring out the complexity of this character. I love how you've used edible food to illustrate abtract attributes - clever. Very nicely done Omneya! Omneya Kamal October 26, 2012 at 6:04 PM As usual Vicky your comments are just so connected so what i were thinking while writing! you just understand what I feel and mean so easily! you are my soul poetess!! Thanks alot dear <3

Tanya Harrington October 18, 2012 at 1:10 PM :) Indeed, a complicated brew. Nicely done. Welcome to the Soup. Omneya Kamal October 18, 2012 at 1:12 PM Thanks Tanya! :) so glad you like the poem, Have a great week end, Omneya