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Her Prize

She complies with the powers of his eyes
Her heart catches fire when she sees her prize

Contest: Any NEW rhyming couplet - only 1
Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan

6/8/2013

Copyright © Russell Sivey | Year Posted 2013

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June 15, 2013 at 10:09 PM

Beautiful piece!- Edward

June 15, 2013 at 9:54 PM

Congratulations Russell.....:-)

June 15, 2013 at 5:36 PM

super poem super win. *love ~SKAT

June 13, 2013 at 9:45 PM

As I said before...it's beautiful! Congratulations, Russell!

Richard Lamoureux

June 13, 2013 at 7:45 PM

Very nice Russell, congratulations on your win.

Connie Gildersleeve

June 13, 2013 at 4:54 PM

A spark might just ignite this passionate couplet. Congratulation Russell on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

June 13, 2013 at 4:05 PM

way to go, Russell. Congrats to you.

Barbara Gorelick

June 13, 2013 at 4:03 PM

Hmm. and her prize might be? lol..congrats on a great write. BG

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

June 11, 2013 at 12:07 AM

This is a very lovely couplet Russell for the contest. I'm sure the sponsor will like it. Good luck. AO

Mustapha Mohammed

June 10, 2013 at 5:40 PM

This sounds like a winner my friend.Exceptional!

June 9, 2013 at 9:10 PM

I'm loving your Couplet, Russell! Stirs up emotions and smiles broaden! Best wishes for the Winners' List with this beauty! Always, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

June 9, 2013 at 6:30 PM

wow! now that is a surprise. Susan, will love this entry. Hope the prize was a big stuff puppy. LOL, JK.. good luck in the contest. xox~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich

June 9, 2013 at 4:08 PM

ooh la la!!!

June 9, 2013 at 12:23 PM

Russell, absolutely love it! All the best for the contest ;) Wilma

June 9, 2013 at 8:37 AM

a different mood form you, russell.. i like how you treated this with a fiery feel... spectacular write, my friend!..:) huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 9, 2013 at 6:28 AM

Fantastic! Good luck Russell!

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 9, 2013 at 5:32 AM

- It's just gorgeous, Russell! - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

June 8, 2013 at 11:47 PM

Wow Russell, this one smoulders good luck ...Seren

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