Her Place

As dawn's early mist rises its wrapped lovingly with care Blanketed in silence its sheer beauty is rare. Muted and glowing the sun delicately peeks through It's presence a heavenly palette of pale earthly hues. With the whispering wind swaying amongst fragile limbs It is transformed like no other a melodic blissful hymn. As a soft breeze caresses the mist gently clears It is here she has found a serenity to hold dear. reworked 08-11-2016

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James Inman

Date: 8/21/2019 8:06:00 AM

A lovely gentle write. I didn't realize how many I did not leave comments on. It's a nice excuse to read them again.

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 4/12/2017 12:59:00 PM

A moment and place well captured. It took me to the top of a hill where I walk the dogs and can just see the sun coming over the Eastern horizon.

Edward Snyder

Date: 4/5/2017 9:22:00 AM

Serenity in nature nice write Lynn

Fiona Callaghan

Date: 8/26/2016 1:36:00 AM

Such a gentle and calming read Lynn. You have used beautiful imagery to portray the dawning of the day. I see from reading through your poems that you were away from Poetry Soup for quite some time. I am so glad you came back. Fiona

John Hamilton

Date: 8/22/2016 10:29:00 AM

what a beautiful write Lynn, so peaceful, so lovely, amazing imagery felt like I was there, could be his place too right!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/20/2016 11:43:00 PM

My first thought as I read this, here is a painter and a poet! Loved this!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/20/2016 1:56:00 PM

I love the feeling of calm and peace which your words transmit, Lynn. Even the smooth flow and rhyme contribute to the overall serene atmosphere. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2016 10:54:00 AM

gorgeous and soothing nature scene, Lynn

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/14/2016 8:34:00 AM

I enjoyed giving this one another read. The title brought to mind a piece I wrote called "In my Place".

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/13/2016 4:54:00 PM

Beautiful imagery of winter's dawn my friend. Hugs Cloudy poet

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/13/2016 2:33:00 PM

Hi Lynn, such a peaceful, calming, beautiful, excellent write you lay before us hear. A journey through this work this evening has given me an inner peace. I am so happy that i decided to drop by this piece. I am a bit lost for words actually, in a very good way. An excellent write Lynn. A definite seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Tera Brown

Date: 8/13/2016 2:07:00 PM

That is really sweet.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2016 2:05:00 AM

Serenity describes this very nicely!!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/12/2016 3:40:00 PM

Beautiful beautiful imagery Lynn - I feel so at peace being caressed by your gentle words :-) hugs Jan xx7

Tim Smith

Date: 8/12/2016 1:18:00 PM

Lovely poem Lynn as if it were floating in the breeze.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/12/2016 12:20:00 AM

What a gorgeous piece, it hardens to the time of romantic poets. Thanks so much for your visits and kind words today. Hugs Rick.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/12/2016 7:39:00 AM

I meant it hearkens, that auto correct can be a pain.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/11/2016 9:55:00 PM

I love the serenity in this magical piece Lynn. Your imagery captures dawn exquisitely! I am faving this beauty my friend. Aloha, Connie ; ) 7 I agree with Daniel.

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/11/2016 7:53:00 PM

This is an excellent write, Lynn. A7 for sure! It leaves the reader with such a peaceful and pleasant feeling. Should be POTD!