Lynn Marie Poet Rhyme

Her Place

As dawn's early mist rises
its wrapped lovingly with care
Blanketed in silence
its sheer beauty is rare.

Muted and glowing
the sun delicately peeks through
It's presence a heavenly
palette of pale earthly hues.

With the whispering wind
swaying amongst fragile limbs
It is transformed like no other
a melodic blissful hymn.

As a soft breeze caresses
the mist gently clears
It is here she has found
a serenity to hold dear.












reworked 08-11-2016

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James Inman August 21, 2019 at 8:06 AM A lovely gentle write. I didn't realize how many I did not leave comments on. It's a nice excuse to read them again.

D.W. Rodgers April 12, 2017 at 12:59 PM A moment and place well captured. It took me to the top of a hill where I walk the dogs and can just see the sun coming over the Eastern horizon.

Edward Snyder April 5, 2017 at 9:22 AM Serenity in nature nice write Lynn

Fiona Callaghan August 26, 2016 at 1:36 AM Such a gentle and calming read Lynn. You have used beautiful imagery to portray the dawning of the day. I see from reading through your poems that you were away from Poetry Soup for quite some time. I am so glad you came back. Fiona

John Hamilton August 22, 2016 at 10:29 AM what a beautiful write Lynn, so peaceful, so lovely, amazing imagery felt like I was there, could be his place too right!

Arthur Vaso August 20, 2016 at 11:43 PM My first thought as I read this, here is a painter and a poet! Loved this!

Paul Callus August 20, 2016 at 1:56 PM I love the feeling of calm and peace which your words transmit, Lynn. Even the smooth flow and rhyme contribute to the overall serene atmosphere. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich August 14, 2016 at 10:54 AM gorgeous and soothing nature scene, Lynn

Richard Lamoureux August 14, 2016 at 8:34 AM I enjoyed giving this one another read. The title brought to mind a piece I wrote called "In my Place".

Bl Devnath August 13, 2016 at 4:54 PM Beautiful imagery of winter's dawn my friend. Hugs Cloudy poet

Vladislav Raven August 13, 2016 at 2:33 PM Hi Lynn, such a peaceful, calming, beautiful, excellent write you lay before us hear. A journey through this work this evening has given me an inner peace. I am so happy that i decided to drop by this piece. I am a bit lost for words actually, in a very good way. An excellent write Lynn. A definite seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Tera Brown August 13, 2016 at 2:07 PM That is really sweet.

Andrea Dietrich August 13, 2016 at 2:05 AM Serenity describes this very nicely!!

Jan Allison August 12, 2016 at 3:40 PM Beautiful beautiful imagery Lynn - I feel so at peace being caressed by your gentle words :-) hugs Jan xx7

Tim Smith August 12, 2016 at 1:18 PM Lovely poem Lynn as if it were floating in the breeze.

Richard Lamoureux August 12, 2016 at 12:20 AM What a gorgeous piece, it hardens to the time of romantic poets. Thanks so much for your visits and kind words today. Hugs Rick. Richard Lamoureux August 12, 2016 at 7:39 AM I meant it hearkens, that auto correct can be a pain.

Connie Marcum Wong August 11, 2016 at 9:55 PM I love the serenity in this magical piece Lynn. Your imagery captures dawn exquisitely! I am faving this beauty my friend. Aloha, Connie ; ) 7 I agree with Daniel.

Daniel Turner August 11, 2016 at 7:53 PM This is an excellent write, Lynn. A7 for sure! It leaves the reader with such a peaceful and pleasant feeling. Should be POTD!