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Her Parting Song

Overshadowed by the green canopy of trees, My heart finds its peace amid the singing of birds... The cuckoo calls out to me shrilly, I raise my head and look her in the eye, She acknowledges my presence with a nod, barely imperceptible, yet beckoning me nearer, She bellows out an unforgettable tune and I am transported back in time To another place... within a man's dancing arms, whirling and twirling and swirling around, laughing... The song ends and I see her fluttering away, farther away from me and my memory, I lock it in my heart and wave my hands, a final goodbye to a beautiful songbird, The shadows are longer now, sunshine long gone, I walk back to my home, alone, yet, satisfied, a walk in the woods has always been effective, My turbulent mind is soothed... for now... 10.25.2021
Unrhymed couplet - 12 syllables and Unrhymed imagery of 8 lines and Free verse For Constance La France's "Let's mix it up" contest

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Date: 11/5/2021 10:36:00 PM
A vision of peace in this lovely poem Jo. I see why it was a first place winner. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 11/4/2021 2:23:00 PM
Jo, awesome write, and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 11/2/2021 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write. I can hear your cuckoo and their calls. Have a blessed a autumn day with your win...............
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Date: 11/1/2021 8:12:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me vicariously experience the delight of walking in the woods. God bless you.
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Date: 10/30/2021 10:24:00 AM
Dear Jo, your beautiful poem sings of the beauty of Nature, reminiscence and an exquisite cuckoo. Your rich imagery brings me to the center of this extraordinary moment and your sweet transportation back in time. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/26/2021 8:58:00 PM
I love the poems of nature. Not forgetting the personal emotion here either. A very nice, clear, concise story that stimulates the senses. Very well done.
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Date: 10/26/2021 2:39:00 AM
A poem that pleases the senses with its imagery, emotions and sounds. Well done.
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